This is great! I hope you get around to working on this again :)

Hm, I'm amazed Sai made it. Though I suppose he could have always made an ink bird and flown across the most dangerous parts.

By the way, one of the paragraphs is rather long. People find it easier to read it when it's shorter, especially when reading on the internet. Some people drop a story because of it, so be careful when you make long paragraphs.

Interesting.

This seems more like Naruto. Good job on that.

By the way, it's 'blond', not 'blonde', when you use it for males. Ino is a blonde, Naruto is a blond. It's the same with brunet and brunette, though it's far more common to just use brown-haired. Readhead is just redhead.

This fiction is very original... Hidan, of all Naruto characters ? Yeah, I wasn't expecting that !

I am very interested about how this fiction will continue (Naruto/Sasuke pairing ? I am looking forward reading how you will make that happen, well, if that happens). I don't really care about the pairing anyway, as long as the fiction is interesting... :)

Thanks alot :)

I am so happy that Naruto isn't turning into a demon!

But is this new method gonna work?

Can't wait until the next chapter!

Wonder what's gonna happen next? Awesome story! Really can't wait until the next chapter!

Hm, interesting. Not quite sure yet about the whole killing Kyuubi, as I can't really see Naruto doing that(perhaps I'm a bit too fond of the old fox).

You don't necessarily need to mark this as a romance, but you could perhaps mention the pairing in the summary. It could help draw in reviewers. You should also mark this as yaoi and maybe hanyou-Naruto.

I wonder what Sasuke wanted to ask Naruto? I have an idea , but it's probably wrong. And finally he is understanding that Madara isn't trust worthy! I woder what's gonna happen next! Great story! I am really looking forward to the next chapter!

Poor Sasuke. 'Do you lo-' Should that end with an '-ve me'?

This is very interesting so far. I wonder, will Naruto be able to hold the Kyuubi when they get the other half of the chakra?

Can't wait till the next chapter!

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Wow this is an amazing story! I am so looking forward to the next chapter!

You are not the only who thinks Sai has a thing for Naruto, judging from the spoilers of this week, am beginning Sakura aka pink evil is also heading onto the same track, arrggh!

Anyhow, I really like where this is going, but I've been without sleep for so long and really only just skimmed it. I like what Kyuubi is hinting at, in fact I think it has merit, but we shall wait and see.

All in all, I really just wanted to encourage you to continue this because it has great potential only am really too knackered to fully appreciate it, but I shall be back...hopefully there will be more to read by then :)

Cheers

I love it! update soon or you die!