about EpicFail... that'd be either murphy or karma...

You ruined the story by adding Shishi who is a horrible OP OC that I just don't care about. Dude why!?

it's not actually the same thousand birds is just the raw form with no nature manulation while lightning blade is the finished from turning the lightning into a blade

protagonist shit accepts humiliation from mere old garbage

Well... it was a pleasure while it lasted.

Wow this is awesome.

I am confused is Naruto smart or dumb in this story? It should have been obvious who the Kusa kunoichi was the minute that Shishi said that the snake was a summons. He even said in the first part of the exams that they were being invaded by snakes.

I am confused. Naruto has a good enough nose to sniff out chakra in mist but couldn’t even recognize Haku’s scent? And Naruto getting tired? That is one problem that Naruto does not have. There is absolutely no way that Naruto would have gotten tired before Haku ran out of chakra to form her ice mirrors. Stop trying to conform your story to canon when there is nothing similar between your story and canon, if this continues then I am going to be dropping this story immediately.

Yay. Shishi has a harem... frankly I rather Shishi not even be a thing. Those kids not convince the author to switch his plans about Sakura nor possibly Ino since in class shes the one who was ogling Naruto and I assuke Temari since both of the previously mentioned two werent then I doubt Temari would've been either.

I had been hoping Temari was part of it as well since I like the pairing but most wont do it and those who do wont attempt to give her any freaking lines like any of the girls.

Damnit.

Ah and shockingly despite all that alpha stuff Hana nor Tsume show on the list and I see yet another that adds Yugito but not Fu.

Um it's supposed to close off the seal that already exists not allowing the chakra to flow to him. Not overpower the powerful 9 tailed fox and injure her from within the seal where she can fight back...

Why was Shishi able to hurt the kyuubi but is able to get hurt and overpowered because of a little youkai burst from basic form 1 curse mark Sasuke?

Wait wait wait. He knows Anko and smells the snakes on those 2 yet didnt report to anyone about them?

Including when he knew Kabuto had info he shouldn't of had? Even saying himself only thr Hokage should know such info?

What's the point in pointing out hes aware enough to know better but still have him say nothing and do nothing about it? Instead of being ignorant about it like canon it makes him look stupid for doing nothing about it.

So the 5 tailed Shishi who possibly had less tails in the past seriously wounded the 9 tailed kyuubi? Okay.

I love how due to some people Sakura has been booted from being with Naruto and the brother instead of Naruto is the one that's suddenly making her happy, feel safe and liked instead. Suddenly were playing pretend that her interactions with Naruto that already happened didnt.

Rather annoyed this is a thing.

Okay what's with the alpha stuff? Does that mean they obey him above their partners?

I keep thinking hes secretly hooked up with Tsume or at least Hana when I read that. Lucky if he was. Especially both.

Why would having access to a new albeit strong type of chakra make him think hes as strong as the kyuubi all of the sudden?

Unless that tiny core that's allowing that small flow of chakra is the same as a super tiny biju I dont see why he'd even ask such a question.