| Reviews for Breaking the Deal |
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  Draconeis chapter 11 . 7/26/2019 A very entertaining end thank you and keep writing other stories we will be here and enjoy life too |
| Draconeis chapter 10 . 7/26/2019 Sniffle ioo man |
| Draconeis chapter 9 . 7/26/2019 Peter Spiderman your such a lovable need Cap can can I say the words ... Score Avengers Assemble ahhh so great so great this is a fun read |
| Draconeis chapter 7 . 7/26/2019 Elixir well than yup I knew it there was no way that May couldn't be saved it was just all clouded it was a gunshot wound at first that's ridiculous to think it wouldn't be curable by any of everybody |
| Draconeis chapter 6 . 7/25/2019 Peter your armies coming just keep fighting |
| Draconeis chapter 5 . 7/25/2019 That was good really good |
| Draconeis chapter 4 . 7/25/2019 Fun and yay for the win |
| Draconeis chapter 3 . 7/25/2019 So it takes two for the deal n Mephisto decided to kidnap mj smart move |
| Draconeis chapter 2 . 7/25/2019 Very interesting chapter I enjoy the way you did that but question is on Peter's daughter really supposed to do that to Mephisto interesting concept there if I do say so |
| Draconeis chapter 1 . 7/25/2019 Intrigue galore what's gonna happen hmm |
 Axccel chapter 1 . 5/6/2018 Another big problem with one more day was MJ made Peter stop being Spider-Man. So, she fucked over everyone he would have saved in those years purely so she could have more time with him each day. Wow, what a selfish bitch. One more day was meant to fic that but screwed it up. It would have been better to have the deal and then MJ and Peter marry anyway and Mephisto realize he forgot that they love each other and so of course would get married again in the past. |
| Guest chapter 10 . 12/20/2017 Some how I thought Deadpool would be the one to figure out to end it |
| ursaber chapter 6 . 11/5/2016 Amazing. This is the most entertaining battle sequence I've ever read in a fan fiction. Truly you must be some kind of wizard. And Spider Man's humor, Oh how great it is especially the Doc Strange ex machina moment. |
| ursaber chapter 5 . 11/5/2016 Oh MY GOD. WHY the hell aren't you the Amazing Spider Man writer 11/10: Superb |
| ursaber chapter 2 . 11/5/2016 PERFECT! |
