I really enjoyed reading this story

Umbridge's name is Dolores, not Deloris...

Nympy?
Not Nymphy?

Gand?

nice you used the song Bohemian Rhapsody to to make this chapter hahahaha

this was so good then you go and mess it up giving him more then one form. have no idea why stupid people think thats great. looks like i will be skipping over a lot of this unless it gets really stupid. most super harry stories are stupid and i mean retarded stupid

Don't you just hate it when stories take a life of their own and go off in directions you never saw coming? I enjoyed this! I'm glad James got to stick around.

Verse 1]
Back in black, I hit the sack
I've been too long, I'm glad to be back
Yes, I'm let loose from the noose
That's kept me hanging about
I'm just looking at the sky 'cause it's getting me high
Forget the hearse, 'cause I'll never die
I got nine lives, cat's eyes
Abusing every one of them and running wild

[Chorus]
'Cause I'm back, yes I'm back
Well, I'm back, yes I'm back
Well, I'm back, back
Well, I'm back in black
Yes, I'm back in black

[Verse 2]
Back in the back of a Cadillac
Number one with a bullet, I'm a power pack
Yes, I'm in a bang with a gang
They've got to catch me if they want me to hang
'Cause I'm back on the track and I'm beatin' the flack
Nobody's gonna get me on another rap
So, look at me now, I'm just making my play
Don't try to push your luck, just get out of my way

[Chorus]
'Cause I'm back, yes I'm back
Well, I'm back, yes I'm back
Well, I'm back, back
Well, I'm back in black
Yes, I'm back in black

[Chorus]
Well, I'm back, yes I'm back
Well, I'm back, yes I'm back
Well, I'm back, back
Well, I'm back in black
Yes, I'm back in black, yow

[Bridge]
Ah, yeah
Oh, yeah
Take my love
Yeah, yeah
Yeah
Ah, hey yeah
Ooh, yeah

Well, I'm back (I'm back)
Back, well I'm (I'm back)
Back (I'm back)
Back (I'm back)
Back (I'm back)
Back
Back in black
Yes, I'm back in black
I've hit the sack outasight

hmmm

OK, now I know there must be a log in my eye. That was an awesome chapter.

So, is the Squid in the family related to the Giant Squid in the Black Lake?

Trading up - good one!

Please write that story of the those and vampire somewhere ista actually a good story and very very folklore

Thanks... really good story. Quick moving, imaginative twists, plenty of action, still quite followable. Well done.

Love your story. The Charlie/Narcissa pairing is unusual, unique, imaginative, fun, sexy... they are both due for a bit of positive fanfic shine time. Thanks for sharing your talent.