Just finish reading you story for the 2nd time. I know it has been a while, but I do hope you get the chance to finish it. Its sounds like it is so close to completion. Love to know if Hatter does what he said he is going to do. What happens when Alice finds out that The Club is her brother. Question that I would love to find out. Please & I Hope you do finish your story. It is very well written. :)

Ahh, the plot thickens! Love your writing!

I'm loving the storyline so far. I think you have done a great job in working out what could have happened after the story ended _ it's awesome.
The passion between the Hatter and Alice! The angst is great tooooo! Can't wait to see what happens with everything!

I like this story. Definitely interesting and well-written(:

Keep writing.

-Taylor Tonks

This story is very good Hope you will continue it soon and complete it. Please!

I've just got into this fandom about half a week ago and have been chasing down fanfics like crazy. So far this one has been my favourite, and is one of the best fics of any fandom I've read in a long time. You've done an excellent job with the characters, the foreshadowing, the independent natures in the relationship between Hatter and Alice, the action, everything! The little twists have been great and the pacing has kept me on the edge of my seat. Really marvellous job! I hope you find the time to finish it. It's a piece well deserving of seeing an end.

Cheers!

Wow! So far, this is awesome! And the grammar is near perfect! A rarity in fanfictions that is greatly appreciated.

Okay so I just discovered Alice and immediately tried to find some fanfiction. You fic is the best one that I have read! Your characters and story plot are very true to the story- and my most beloved hatter is exactly how I thought he should be written! I can't wait to read how this ends- maybe a small Hatter & Alice wedding!? Please update

OH. MY GOD.

That's the first words that came out of my head when I finished reading this chapter. The rest was of a sort of "Some people -Carol and Alice- will be really pissed". I would expect rage and kicks, specially from Alice. Really loved your story, and I'm glad that I didn't have to wait six months to read it, though I'm sure it was worthy. Please, please pleeeeeeeeeease keep writing! I NEED to know what's going to happen, I mean, the twist of Thomas being Alice's brother was something I did not see coming, and even though I've seen it before, it seriously took me by surprise, which is what I love most about stories. I will nag the living shit out of you until you write again :), I have a lot of free time and kind of a weird need to see how this will go.

Pretty please write :)

I've been devouring scads of Alice fic, and how this scene plays out is written a lot. I think yours is the best by far, though!

That WAS an ugly shirt. :)

i need more yours is the best continuation of all of the ones on this site thank you for taking the time to write this

Loving the fancy talk. I love it when I get to write the dialogue for a pretentious royal or something. It's so much fun! XD

Call me a geek, but I adore the amount of detail that is put into the aftermath of the fall of the House of Cards. XD It is well thought-out and addresses a lot of the questions I would have myself for what would happen afterwards. Lol. Aside from switching between past and present tense occasionally, this is very well done!

I'm so happy you've returned to this story! I was terribly sad when you had to leave it on hiatus, and I'm looking forward to seeing you continue it. I can't wait to find out who's been poisoning Jack and why, and whether Jack and his advisers can save Wonderland. Looking forward to more!