No, Lightning. You do not get a choice in this matter. You are mine, now and forever. Nobody else will ever have you. Mine.

I just thought I should comment on what Hope said and one other thing. First, I think you compared Hope to a little kid a bit too much in this story. He was actually pretty mature by the time they got to gran pulse.

Second, that may have been a bit too harsh. Maybe "breaking guys hearts" or something along those lines would have been better. Just a thought from the way Hope was reacting to everything earlier.

AWWW! This is kind of sad. I hope Hope got a happy ending. I like that Fang and Vanille decided to help him.

I love all chapters from this x Hope is so cute ;)

Thank you for writing!

nope!

hope's not letting you go light!

Great job and fishing the story! Now for some honest thoughts...

Not a big fan of the time-skip for a few reason, after nearly all the story's focus was not that, I ultimately liked the happy ending XD! I loved the chapters before it alot but here it seemed a bit too sudden, and weak compared to the rest.

I was still thinking we were going to see Hope confront Snow, and hope & lightning would resolve things a little more/end on a little bit more of a happier note. And more thoughts from Fang & Vanilla.

Again I'm glad they made up but it still felt a bit depressing.. Hope & Lightning relationship during the 4 years, its a very long time for such a problem that isn't really spoken about till 4 years, a little to much.(imho)I did enjoy that they sent letters to each other.. but at the same time it felt even worse since how in the letters were not them being completely honest. And when Lightning found that Hope wasn't writing to her much, was painful to read. Both Lightning & Hope were hurting somewhat during those years. I did enjoyed the flashback, it was fleshed out well.

I Loved how Sazh found another women in his life, being such a interesting down-to-earth kind person, he would have no problem finding someone xD

This badly needs a sequel. The LightxHope scene at the end was way! short. After all the problems they had, I would love to see them enjoying there time together. Thankyou For writing the story questionmarxx. I really enjoyed it.

wow this ending is very bittersweet.. bu you know it's also very real how everything doesn't just come together neatly for them. it's rather messy like real life. i enjoyed this fic the entire time. good job..also it was nice finally seeing what transpired that first time

Nice... very well done. Maybe the only thing would be the punctuation.

Anyway, please write at least an omake about their life as a couple.

Nice Job.

oh i really want there are more scenes about hope and lightning together!

They are really cute expecially when lightning need to be look after )

hope you could write a sequel to tell us what their life looks like! looool

You've got quite a few grammatical errors floating about. It doesn't make the story impossible to read or anything, but it does strain the reader, and it makes it more difficult than it needs to be, since you kinda have to insert the punctuation with your mind.

There's a few run on sentences, and you're not ending your sentences with punctuation, especially in the dialogue.

It's not:

"I have no idea one minute he's up then next he's not"

It'd be more like: "I have no idea. One minute he's up and the next he's down."

That's not all there is, but I'm not gonna address everything in one review.

I dunno, the story itself isn't bad. I generally find the younger Hope/Lightning fics a little tougher to get through, but I think yours is one of the better ones out there. If you write anymore, I'd like to see you fix the grammatical errors. Again though, it's a pretty good story.

Me: awesome chapter! cant wait till the next one. *yells* hope still loves lighting *laughs*

Random: ok you have a death wish

Me: why?

Random: look behind you

Me: *looks behind me to see Light and Hope glaring at me* O_O...*runs away*

Ouch it hurt my feeling that the both of them are in fight. Very looking forward to the next chapter, please update as soon as possible.

Referred from Hope’s harsh mention they did not just kiss…

Did they...go that far?

awesome chapter! i love hopexlighting together.

Me: *plans to get them back together*

Hannah (my FF13 character): what are you doing?

Me: nothing *rans down hill but trips and rolls down*

Fang and Vanille: *watches as i still rolls down hill*

Hannah: BIZZARE

Me: *frozen in ice*

Everyone else: how...O_O

Please, continue, It gets more and more interesting. So, now we know that they actually shared a night, ne?