There's no e in Macy.

I really want to see more stories of this shipping. This was really good.

I also find this line a bit funny. "This time he carried her to a nearby hospital where staff needed something to do. " I could just imagine them all standing around doing absolutely nothing.

Cute story. I like Fireshipping so would you make more stories about this rare pairing. There are only two Fireshipping stories exist in .

Great one shot!

What a great fic! While you seem to have the honor of being the first to create a FireShipping fic, it's a shame that this pairing doesn't get more love.

Not for nothing, PtR, but this might have been better off as a slightly longer story. Still, this caught my attention, if only for the pretty decent characterization/writing and the Fireshipping(while my main Pokemon ship is Advanceshipping-with good reason-Fireshippng did come before and is still one of my favorites).

magebear7, Macey's Starmie is straight from the canon; she used it to defeat at least one of Junichi's pokemon in the Silver Conference(the day before Ash battled that same trainer to a draw that ended with Bulbasaur vs. Meganium). True, Macey's main focus is fire-type pokemon, but that doesn't preclude her from training pokemon of other types(case in point, Macey's Electabuzz).

um, maceys big thing is fire pokemon. she wouldn't be caught dead with a water pokemon.

Review for "A Burnt Fever"

10:04pm GMT

Thursday, 15 April 2010

Greetings, this is GK Mendoza reviewing!

This is the very first AshMacey fic I've read so far, and I'm very pleased to day that you made it a very good one! I look forward on you making more fics focusing on pairings that are not very much popular, such as this one.

That would be all for now. As always, more power, and keep up the good work!

I must say, that this story was very well done.

This is something new and exciting...nice job.

wow, that was a great story! and I think that this is the best Ash and Macey story! well, the only one I think so far. anyways Awesome story!