Reviews for うずまき戦:Uzumaki Taisen
Guest chapter 10 . 4/30/2017
Not finished my butt its been 7 years i know its unlikely but pleaseeeeeee come baaaaaaacccckkkkkkk
werewolf hunter chapter 10 . 11/12/2016
Karin should be Naruto older sister
This Username Is Classified chapter 1 . 11/15/2015
...LOLWUT
On earth just happened xDDD
But that was surprising; wasn't as bad as I thought – when I read the summary, I was wondering whether it'd be something like... Minato finding some other girl, yet that was clearly no the case, so! Great!
chelsea chapter 10 . 12/3/2013
Well i think karin could be sasukes sister but his mom cheated on his dad with an uzamaki. Just to put more drama there lol... X
BlosChe chapter 10 . 1/27/2013
...I am seriously in a huff right now. I HATE Karin. But it's your story. MAKE. HER. AN. ORPHAN. :)

...Jokes. Uzumaki.

MoonlightMidnight

P.S. I still don't like KARIN! ;)
ThreeDeeStars chapter 10 . 1/14/2013
I may be really late, but Karin should be Naruto's sister by like a year or two? Keep on going!
Guest chapter 10 . 7/7/2012
UZUMAKI
Maj-chan chapter 10 . 5/19/2012
First, I vote for Uzumaki and second, I FUDGING LOVE YOUR FIC.

Third, finish this shizz so I can sleep now.

I love your version of Kushina! She's so crazy and and and ... Like me? I haven't read or watch Bleach though :/

So please, - oh please - update?
Angela345 chapter 10 . 11/3/2011
Loving this story n I think Karin should b sasuke sister.

Please hurry, can't wait for next chapter :-D!
alphaprincess0803 chapter 10 . 1/30/2011
Hi~!

I really love this story! It's rare to find good quality KushinaxMinato fics on here, sadly. But yours is really good! It has plenty of humor with a dash of drama and of course romance, and keeps me entertained.

And, as I make it a policy in my reviews to praise AND give constructive criticism... Here's the negative part.

I think the only thing that you could work on is that your story seems slightly rushed. Don't drag it out or anything, but fewer time-skips and more in-depth explanations would help a lot. I especially thought that Kushina fell in love with Minato again too quickly. If she was heartbroken for 5 years (as proven by her single status), I think it would take some time for her to warm up to the ex again. I also thought Minato's jerk-ish behavior was somewhat ludicrous. If you're trying to win your ex-girlfriend over again, you don't threaten to fire her!

But seriously, I really loved this overall. Otherwise I wouldn't have reviewed.

Oh, and I vote that Karin should be Minato and Kushina's baby! Because since Naruto is like Minato's carbon copy, Kushina should have a little mini-tomato/habenero! XD It would also be more realistic if Karin, a redhead, were Kushina's daughter rather than Mikoto's. Because genetically speaking, all of Fugaku and Mikoto's children should have dark hair and black eyes.

Of course, if you really want Karin to be an Uchiha, you could always say that there was a weird genetic mutation and that she somehow got red hair. And then you could spin out a whole drama with Karin feeling like an outcast because of her strabge looks and then have her future intended boyfriend comfort her, and voila! You get a happy couple.

But yeah, I'm all for Karin being an Uzimaki... Although shouldn't it be Namikaze?

I love that you're not making Karin an evil rabid Sasuke fangirl like she almost always is in other fanfictions! This is very refreshing.

Please update soon!

Theresa
iMashedmyPotatoes chapter 8 . 11/5/2010
CUTE! :D and hilarious LOL. I love bleach too ~
asdfghjkl chapter 8 . 11/5/2010
LOLOLOL THIS IS SO FUCKING HILARIOUS! :))))))))))))))))))))
LalalaLucy chapter 4 . 10/12/2010
This story is pretty cute, a little loud though. I can't imagine anyone yelling as much as they do. XD

And no, they are not 45. I have no idea where you read that from. Jiraiya is not only five years older than them. They are in their early twenties.

Okey, gonna continue reading this silliness! :D
iixorijuos chapter 10 . 9/15/2010
make karin an uzumaki, sorry i can't vote, i'm using the mobile version of ffnet,
if you continue the st0ry, could make the facebook talk with their children :)
zas118 chapter 10 . 9/6/2010
please update soon :3
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