Oh this was good. I enjoyed this very much.

DUDE! Dude! Im so mad at myself for being do fkn late in reading and reviewing this. I got behind and I'm trying to read everything from the promtp. But oh man...you KNOW how I feel about these two...my wonderful, beloved RatedRKO

Oh nom nom. Adam's a fucking...man...I loved this line: "My name isn't needed, I only need yours so I know what to scream."

I love you so much for this! It was nom nom nom! YOu dont even have to ask. It was perfectly written!

~Nef

Damn. Wow, that was something else. I had to read it again to fully take it in. Amazing job.

I am so glad to see you writing this out since I have always admired your writing style and kinda wanted to see how you would do if you wrote some of my favourite characters or pairings.

I love it when someone built a story with strong and beautifully phrased sentences. The way you described how Randy was spellbounded by Adam's beauty and couldnt resist following him was very well done.

Adam sounded so delicious and hot. So ready to be taken and sexy as ever. He was so seductive and Randy couldnt resist the temptation. The little dialogue between the strangers was beautiful. I loved how Adam said he only needed to know Randy's name so he knew what to scream in passion. The way they engaged in sex and yet werent fimiliar with each other showed how in a trance Randy must have been. The dominance of Randy is hotter than fire. And I adored the way you wrote Adam. He is an extreme beauty.

Wow! That was a major twist. Didnt expect at all. I admire you creativity and idea alot. This was very different and very unique. I love it when someone's effort even in a one-shot can be showcased with brilliant conception. Poor Randy got owned. I dont know if it makes me sound sick or what but I am finding comfort for Randy in the fact that he atleast became a piece of meat worth something. I mean he did get to fuck Adam. Its a good way to leave.

Even though I am not completely sure as if what kind of a creature Adam was, a vampire or what, it didnt stop me at all from loving it and being entertained to pieces. Very well written, and well-thought story. Loved it!

Wow, that was interesting.

Oh... Dark and mysterious, but I loved it! Excellent job!

.: TMM :.

Very hot, and it seems like randy's night has only just begun!

Wow! Well, that was interesting for sure! I love your descriptions they're great. Lol, Randy has become dinner. I find that amusing and probably shouldn't hahaha.

Good job, that was really different I like it.

Right, so me being a dumbass is gonna assume this is some kind of vampire story? I don't dabble much in the supernatural so I'm guessing that having sex with one equals the end for a human? Ach, well either way, I really liked this!

The way Randy just followed added to the background creepiness and tension of the story, the whole thing about being on autopilot was just great - as if there was nothing he could do about his attraction and despite being worried he silenced it all because of his lust.

Apart from the fact that to me any fic in which Orton gets pwned is an automatic win, I loved the subtle allusions as to who the accomplices were too.

Another great fic, one I've read 3 times already and will be firing in my favourites to come back to again 3

LOVE IT!