He this seems like this is going to be a good fic I hope u update soon

Great chapter and story so far please continue this story soon.

Hi, wanted to say I enjoy your story so far. As to the people who don't want a YAOI story I would agree with it, personally I don't think that Naruto would be the same gay; however I can understand not wanting to change your story style. I would suggest that you could always just make Naruto A sexual in that he really just doesn't care. that way you can can him appreciate men and women but don't have to make any sex scenes that will loose you readers.

Working out Kabuto is a spy when no one but Kakashi did seems slightly over the top to be honest.

But I cant wait to see what reactions to Jiraiya will be if the apparent favortism was true.

Ooh, this is a good story. The Tomo team is really, I don't know, awesome XD I want to read more of their interaction, I'm especially curious about the youngest member ;o Looking forward to next chapter! And I was reading your comments before, in my opinion, don't feel pressured to change pairing to suit others than yourself. As a writer, it's your story, your world. And I'm looking forward very much on how you will form this world. Looking forward to your update! ;D

I have this creepy feeling when reading the interaction between Sasuke and Naruto, like the one that says don't bend over in the community shower.

Hey, Kurogane from Tsubasa Chronicles uses that! Cool!

Hi Ichi-Alice, this is a really cool story you have come up with. :)

I wouldn't mind if you made this fic yaoi,

If you did, could the paring be Gaara, Kimimaro or Neji ?

And for your other reviews who are saying saying they will stop reading your fic if you make it yaoi, just ignore them.

It's your story you make it however you like to,

Take care and have a nice weekend. :-)

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Dominic.

Your story basically sucks as it is starting to sound like a yaoi story.

Well done so far. This story includes one of the better ways of having Naruto leave Konoha.

The story is kind of jumpy in the beginning; especially because of the POV changes. But grammatically and spelling wise seems to be up to par.

None of the Oc's seem Mary-sueish so far, which if nice. Don't like the characterization of Sasuke or Naruto very much. Too different from canon.

In regards to pairing. Do not fall into the trap of completely swaying to your readers whims. If you lose a few readers, so what? As long as you have a solid story and reasonable ways of making things work well together. I don't see why not. My preference is non-yoai fics to be honest. But I am willing to continue to read this story either way as long as there are warnings for graphic parts (as should be there for het parts as well).

Keep up the good writing.

In a vote for Ino,

SlovenChord

the story has good basis but like others I do not read Yaoi stories... so if you decide to go that route, I guess that will be it for this story for me.

Well this is a rather interesting though confusing at times story.. But think the confusing part comes from the title as not sure how it will play into the story. But look forward to finding out what happens next.

A very interesting chapter and story in general. There are fairly few stories that have Naruto actually see the world as different shades of grey and even fewer do it well. The chapters have been great, the only complaint I have about the chapters so far is chapter 1 when Tomo reveals to Naruto what he contains and who his father is, I found that it did not flow very well and there were parts that weren't very good, sorry it is a bit hard to describe. Anyhow, I personally would rather the story not be a yaoi but I will keep reading though to see how it turns out. I am curious about why you think that Naruto should be gay. I mean, I understand that you don't see Naruto connecting with any of the main canon girls as they are but if that is the only reason then I have to mention that other than Gaara, and to a slight extent Sasuke, I don't see Naruto connecting to any of the main Canon guys. Also you could just make your own character but that is your own decision. If you are really worried about people stopping reading because it is yaoi, you could just not pair Naruto with anyone in the story. Anyhow, great job so far and I look forward to the next chapter, FOR NOW... joking :p. Take care. V(_)V

I know I have mentioned that I would not mind seeing Naruto paired with Temari or Ino, but I don't really care. Naruto can be gay, bi or whatever, as long as it works will the flow of the story. I like how the story is going so far and this is great chapter. I look forward to seeing how Mana, Tomoaki and Naruto will develop in the future.

I like the chapter.