Reviews for Justice |
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![]() ![]() ![]() It's been 5 years to the day that this chapter was put up and I'm just now getting around to reading it -_- I love it though! ja ne! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yes this is a really great story, I love this one! But I've to agree with LeapingSensei. Even if you'd to write a beautiful (too short lemon), I think it's totally inappropriate to make it take place just after Greg's rape. It's really a traumatic event and you can't have sex with another one, even the one you truly love, just after this. But apart this chapter, really good idea this crossover with my two favourite slash couples (even if I wanted to see Flack and Danny together, not Lindsey and Danny). Just my point! ;-) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm sorry, I do think this is a good story and idea, but really? Did you do any research into what victims of rape go through? Never mind that for Nigel to go from idealistic stalker to rapist is completely out of character for him, but any victim of rape would be deeply traumatised and certainly wouldn't be so quick to have sex again. One of my parent's friends was raped and it took her months just to let people touch her again; if a victim was even able to get that intimate again at the least it would take months or even years. This story certainly has potential, but to be so ignorant of an extremely sensitive issue seems downright insulting to its victims. Please do the research if you're going to include rape in any future stories! |
![]() ![]() ![]() this would have made a way better csi trillogy! i love this story! xxx mia |
![]() ![]() ![]() is it finished, no it cant be, crying. wonderful story) maybe you can write a sequel) keep up the good work) |
![]() ![]() ![]() poor greg, but finally he was rescued:) hope that nigel crane will stay in jail now. please update:) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Poor Nick and Greg. going though so much. hopefully Nick gets to hurt Nigel. Please update soon |
![]() ![]() Are you crazy? you just can't leave it there! Right now I'm mentally punching Nigel Crane. please update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() poor greg, just got away from nigel, then adam gets napped, so greg has to save him, great chapter:) one question,does nick and greg have any kids? just wondering. please update soon:) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great update! Can't wait for the next chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow intrigue |
![]() ![]() ![]() csi:ny) a crossover, not bad at all:) please update soon:) |
![]() ![]() Pease let Nick save Greg! Update soon!:) |
![]() ![]() ![]() My heart is breaking, poor Greg! Please let Nick find him! and update VERY soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this story! I hate it when people hurt my Greggo but this story just represents how the team would feel and I can't wait for you to finish it! |