Reviews for The Return |
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Melidona chapter 3 . 4/14/2012 OMG! When I saw that there was a SEQULE to such a awsome story, with three chapters already, I just about squealed! I am glad you had them go back some way because it felt a little random that they had to flee for their lives from the tribe they went threw so much with/for and never go back. I'm so excited to see where you go from here now! Lol hope you post again soon! |
Zept chapter 3 . 8/31/2011 The sequel is great, so far. I hope that you update it soon. |
PsychicZai chapter 3 . 3/5/2011 This story is amazing. Both the first and this sequel. Please continue this soon! |
Pink Tubby Custard chapter 3 . 1/27/2011 oh snap, this story is intense. :O Please update soon, I look forward to finding out more. |
colossal-fusion chapter 3 . 1/4/2011 I absolutely love this story! You are such a great writer, descriptive words with amazing storytelling really makes the writing pop! Your writing style is leading, the story you have created has left me speechless. I look forward to more of your writing and future chapters! I hope you will continue; it's just such a beautifully crafted story. Good luck! |
Sweet-Hearted SilverEars chapter 3 . 12/19/2010 Crap... I hope that they can get away... |
A Drunk Canadian chapter 1 . 10/24/2010 Why are you not comtinuing this story? If your not going to contonue it then at least tell us readers |
YaoiBoyToy chapter 3 . 9/27/2010 Wow... quite a mess they have gotten into. You have a good story going here. I'm really enjoying this. Looking forward to more, YaoiBoy |
YaoiBoyToy chapter 1 . 9/26/2010 Nice to see this story continue! I have to admit, the moment Norm stepped into the hut, despite the circumstances, was... hot... :) I'm curious to see where this goes. Take care, YaoiBoy |
OrianPrime92 chapter 3 . 8/14/2010 Up. Date. You. Jerk. TT NOOO! Stupid humans! -beats'm- |
F0R3V3R-L0ST chapter 3 . 6/10/2010 this is getting better and better all the time please update soon! great sequal. |
Arigazi chapter 3 . 6/5/2010 Argh! I feel as bitter as the last time Norm was with the Omaticaya (sp?). Manipulative (bleep)s! I'm sad that Mo'at died, but... I bet it was partially from guilt. I don't know where this sequel is going, but I hope it isn't a happy and fuzzy ending, unless it's just a... an agreement or accord or something between clans because I feel like Jake and Norm belong with their other clan. Secluded like that, everything was ideal and perfect, but... couples like Jake and Norm shouldn't HAVE to be secluded which is what others should learn to accept, but... I feel like a happy and fuzzy ending will be... too perfect. Anyway, I was kind of disappointed with the boys' hunting and tracking skills because they didn't even see the ambush coming from behind them and... they were fenced in? I would think they would see that as they were moving in, but... maybe it was erected after they were moving in? Maybe the humans saw more Na'vi coming on radar or something? I don't know. It's frustrating - did the attack just happen, or had it happened a while ago because there were already forces set up and everything... Oh! I hope nothing too bad happens to Jake - I'm glad Norm didn't speak too, and equally happy that the humans seem to be so far ignorant as to how Jake really knows English. Anyway, as ever, I'm eager for the next chapter. Arigazi |
Blue-Eyed Chica chapter 3 . 6/3/2010 love it! |
SlashySlashSlash chapter 3 . 6/1/2010 Wow that didn't go how I thought it would! I seriously thought it would go in the direction of actually saving them... not that the humans would capture them! Thanks for updating :D |
ReachingTheLost777 chapter 3 . 6/1/2010 this is getting so interesting please update soon XD |