ok, i enjoyed this...but the ending was a bit of anticlimax. The rest of the story is amazingly well written and well done :)

fucktard

sucks

Your stuff gets funnier and funnier. Like the boy saying "Care to explain?" and "Fine be that way" it was just so lol. and then a zombie eating them lololol!

Nice work with the McCarthy prose style, but I didn't like the ending. Much too sudden. It's a hard book to finish, but to resort to something so formulaic as a kind of zombie ending that is "deus ex machina."