You do realise it's now 2020 can I suggest you start updating with immediate effect

Actually fuck off im done with this bs you call a fanfic Sakura can just do any shit she wants and she gets away and you make NARUTO so ducking retarted like fuck off I’m actually pissed

No I actually just thought of something funny so say you decided to put the story up for adoption or make a new one if you and sasuke and Kiba beat up the OTO organization and Naruto wakes up and he see them all KO and decideds to fight Sasuke but kurama explains to him what is actually going on

Right now Naruto’s group has Him (Captain devil fruit eater) Sasuke (First mate devil fruit eater) Sakura (Navigator)
Kiba (Sharpshooter devil fruit eater)Shikamaru (Cook) Haku (Doctor Devil fruit eater and have it manifest in the world)
Garra (Captain Of his own crew) that got separated when they enter the Grand line) from what I get from this is if they fall over board only 2 (well 3 if San I can stay outside while haku is sleep) can swim and save them man they need more people who can swim. Also if you are to busy I would suggest putting this up for adoption or making a newer one like a version 2 or something

Also since you said Luffy and boa have a newborn is it boy or girl and what devil fruit does it have boy gum gum, girl love love also read that sasuke has wado ichimonji but what about Shusui and Sandi Kitesu probably at wano or someone has them

I would also like to see how sasuke and kiba beat oto organization

Also shikamaru could be lazy legs shikamaru like red leg Zeff or black leg Sanji just saying

I love reading Naruto one piece crossover especially ones where he has his own crew and this one is one of my favorites I really enjoy watching the anime and seeing how Luffy fought zoro over him beating up the bounty hunter every time I read this last chapter I always think if Naruto is gonna fight sasuke and kiba just like Luffy zoro I also think about water 7 and Enies lobby with GOD Usopp and Luffy fight. I also think about if shikamaru is gonna get something like diable jambe or sasuke with asura I just keep thinking about ways to put these guy with the actual storyline just gets me really excited anyway love this story and the overlord one too.

To be blunt i hate this gic

narutos bandana is like Luffys strawhat nice

I love it and I know you need help my friend so my advise to you is just calm down think about what you wish to if it fanfiction related or otherwise just calm down and think about what you want to do.

Interesting chapter

its minato namikaze not arashi

It's Gatling not gatering

noot to be a flamer or nothing but you mixed something up on your first chapter of the sea shinobi Luffy is un affected by bullets from guns but is affected by swords and sharp objects that can cut as his flesh is rubber. just letting you know.