| Reviews for The Sixteenth Minute |
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  Guest chapter 1 . 5/18 Beautiful. Two dozen times, and beautiful every time. |
| Guest chapter 1 . 11/4/2017 Beautiful |
 Hazmatt chapter 1 . 11/16/2015 Great story! I enjoyed it! |
| HeathRowTottie chapter 1 . 11/18/2013 He kissed her. Yea! |
| obamagirl chapter 1 . 8/8/2013 LOVE! |
| onewritergirl93 chapter 1 . 1/29/2011 I LOVE this! It's so in character and realistically written, I can see it all happening to them. I love that they knew they had to take it slow, because that's what they'd always done. That's how I see it, and I've never been a huge fan of them jumping right in, because I don't think it could/would happen that way. It's hard to write it that way for me though, without any awkwardness, but I think you did a great job of making their feelings very clear and just...great! :D |
| Blinky38 chapter 1 . 11/8/2010 I love this story, definitely one of my favourite "Loyalty" stories. It has such a sweet ending, much like I would have liked to have seen on CI. I can't wait to see how they are going to resolve these issues in season 10. I'll have to download the episodes, they'll take forever to screen in Austraia :-) |
| Admiral Lily chapter 1 . 9/13/2010 Excellent fic. I've not seen Loyalty yet. I stopped watching a few years ago. I'm nervous about seeing it but your fic helps. Great job. |
| star jelly chapter 1 . 7/16/2010 That was a really beautiful look at their final episode together. I'm sorry it took me so long to review, but I really loved it! |
| OuroborosSnyder chapter 1 . 5/22/2010 I love this! ~Snyder~ |
| Weathergirl chapter 1 . 5/12/2010 Yes yes yes! You gave us a better ending than USA! I like how you brought in both POVs (such a Jami thing to do!) and gave us both of their impressions of what took place during the 'firing' as it was happening. You kept this at a modest pace but still delivered with what worked as a wrap up. We can only assume they would now be at "this" stage (if the show continued, WHICH IT DIDN'T...at least not according to the Goren/Eames fans). Thanks for putting this together! You rock as always! |
| Veda Leen chapter 1 . 4/22/2010 I love your stories ! ;) |
| Ainsley Hibbs chapter 1 . 4/15/2010 OMG! This is the way the show SHOULD have ended. This was a beautiful ending to a great team. The show will NEVAH be the same without both of them. Rock on, Bobby and Alex! Rock on! |
| hippysheep chapter 1 . 4/15/2010 I think i just fell in love again... Thank you been a while since i visited fanfic and I love this. Keep writing .pls. Goren and Eames deserve a happy ending after the show. P.s.'stealing'this for my favorites ) |
| Betty BOKOR chapter 1 . 4/11/2010 I loved it; simple and exactly how I imagined it would have happened. You did a great job! |
