cant wait till the next chapter :) xx

Loved it

updateeee

I feel sorry for Edward and Bella. I know that Bella wants to pursue a relationship with him and she can't because of what is going on in her family. I just know that Edward is keeping secrets too. I hope that they can follow their hearts. I also hope that Rose is able to get Bella the help she needs. She is definately in trouble.

That a cliff hanger and the secrets that are hidden.

looks good so far

I love how everyone is connected. I think Aiden is over reacting to Edward and BElla. I think TAnya is going to be a problem. I love that Aiden and Bella are so close.

I am loving this story right now. There have been other stories that seem to have similar plot lines, but they are not as good as this one. I love it and I can't wait until the next chapter!

intriguing beginning!

You ARE evil, aren't you? That was really good.

God, i hope you write next chapter soon.

Best luck

Oh man, Edward is missing something. Perhaps a prudy little brunette? Tanya is so annoying. Edward should dump her. I mean, I rather have high school drama then to still be attached to her. But I'm glad Rosalie scared her away. So did his mom really turn off his stereo? That has me curious. Very curious. And can I just say how adorable Jasper and Alice are? They make me gush. Oh my God, I can imagine Edward all determined to jump the cliff. Badass.

How is it that Edward dreamt of this girl's eyes? Is he from his past of sorts? Maybe recognizes her? Oh boy... reading on!

xoxo

V.M.

I absolutely loved "Your Guardian Angel". You are truly an amazing write, Mimi. So when I found out that you were writing another story, of course I had to check it out! You have a knack for dramatic scenes. That's a plus because when you're reading, you see it in your head, as much as you can from the author's words. Obviously different from watching a movie. So your description just do that - bring the scene to life, so to say. It was so heartbreaking with Edward in the rain, the clicking of the call and the thunder. Dramatic. Love it! That last sentence - "This was the last offence they would commit against my family" - gives me the sense that the men who took Bella have something to do with Edward's family. Such mystery! And I wonder where Bella is held captive... if she even is held "captive".

xoxo

V.M.

GAHHH! Please update soon!

The fear, nerves, tension and despair Edward is feeling has to be one of the worse in the world. Remembering the last words spoken to each other weren't nice or kind doesn't make things any easy at all.

Then being helpless unable to do anything, it can't be pretty being him right now.

OHMIGOSH THIS CHAPPY WAZ SO AWESOME AND U R SO AMAZING AND A GREAT WRITER. PLZ UPDATE SOON CUZ I LUV THIS SO MUCH. AND PLZ KILL TANYA. SHES A BITCH AND SLUT AND HOE AND BELLA IS KICKASS AND PRETTY.

Y U SO EPIC?

V xoxo

Loved it!