I know this is suppose to be another universe, but it makes no sense for the gender switching and making Videl half saiyan and the humans not. It's just so inconsistent and trite.

Please add Gods like ssj blue goku and veggie and beerus or vejito

OK. I wasn't expecting that

ICHIGO AND GOHAN FUSE WITH THE EARRINGS OF THE KAIS

I'm curious of the next chapter!

Neat!

Super Epic. like the cameo appearance made me laugh

Thx for the chichi story part really interesting ...I wonder wat evil kakarot's reaction will b when he finds his mate/slave missing...And wats this new power vegeta has him all macho going...And will gohan and goten see chichi of this new world and their reaction too..so many questions and this story get more exciting plz plz plz update soon

You jump around way to much. Everything is choppy, I think the idea is cool, but nothing really makes sense. Nothing really flows. You just jump from one scene to another without any transition. You also aren't very consistent. You will mention one thing in a past chapter and totally contradict yourself in a future chapter, or you will totally forget you said something in a past chapter and repeat yourself multiple times in later chapters. I like the idea, but it really doesn't make much sense at all. I was able to get through it because I thought the idea was cool, but your writing needs a lot of improvement. Like a TON of improvement.

If I was going to going to continue reading this in the future, I would most likely give you a more detailed review with examples and suggestions.

Good luck!

early DBGT I see. And cool how you added in SSJ3 Vegeta. If that's the case, I wonder if you'll max out Broly and make him become LSSJ3 Broly (despite what the game or anyone else says, it's not SSJ3 Broly. SSJ Broly is still scrawny while LSSJ Broly is a behemoth of muscles, so it would be proper that the "SSJ3" form of his is actually LSSJ3. And sorry about that little rant).

that chapter was so freaking epic. cant wait for the next. your story also semi inspired mine

Oh dear lord. Other Earth Chi-chi kisses Goku.

Can't wait to see both Broly's fight each other (maybe the Other Earth Broly has a transformation similar to Legendary Super Saiyan, but more controlled).

I kinda figured Goku would be confused since all the villains are good guys and all the heroes are evil in the alternate universe.

cool!

update this story plz dnt leave it like that plz

Oh my god! PLEASE DON'T QUIT BECAUSE OF WHAT I SAID! I"M SO SORRY! I TAKE IT ALL BACK! PLEASE!