Wow. This was amazing and cute! When Yoh recalled his promise, I was so moved. I love it. Brilliant work.

Aw! That was sweet! I love these kinds of stories, great job!

That was so sweeeeeeet... Couldn't help the tears :'3

Wooow, awesome oneshot! XD I really love it, it's a great idea.

This one shot story is beautiful,

really, really beautiful.

It's very nice.

I liked the idea and it's well written! I also think Hao would be posessive with Yoh. And...Hao crying? That's a face of him we don't see, I think it's interesting.

Awesome story! I love how you describe yoh & hao like true brothers, so PLEASE keep writing shaman king fics especially yohxanna :D i love your stories about them. ByeBye.

Woah, that was deep. Not really my cup of tea, since I'm not a big Hao fan, but it was deep nevertheless. I liked how you portrayed how desperate and possessive a person can get when they've been alone for a long time and finally find something to hold on to, and more in this case since that someone is well, a fragment of his own soul.

...I feel kinda inspired to write a poem/song now o.O

-Your random and really annoying friend,
Raven.

Whoa~! That was some oneshot! I loved it! Hao created Yoh, and THAT's why he exists. It makes complete sense and actually flows with the series. Hao being posessive of Yoh is so cute. And totally true, too. I really felt bad for Hao in this story, but then the cute ending made everything all happy and wonderful again. Great job, It was so cute!

i think the multi chapter idea wuld b more interesting, but this is still good _

Awesome story! I really enjoyed reading.

My reason for being here is to be your friend Hao

AMEY.

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MAS AINDA AMO MAIS O HAO PQ ELE EH MEW D

hey (:

this was wonderful! its so sweet. i like your yoh&hao brotherly fics thanks for this!

-Misa.

Aw, I loved it a lot. 3

A very cute idea on how Yoh came to be. I have always toyed with the thought on how the original Hao's soul separated into two different ones and this is a wonderful idea. x3

*cries* WAH! That's so sweet *sobs* Oh me like this one! Me like the part where Yoh cried after he remembered all his memory and his promise to Hao ;_;

Keep up the good work, Angel. Hopefully able to read another fic of Hao and Yoh from you~ *uses a lot of tissues*