Awesome, pretty good, i really loved it.

the Asakura family is cute and I love your stories about them. Its a shame that you seem to have forgotten some of them and left them unfinished since they were great and had great potential

An adorable bonding moment. Good details.

This is a beautiful story. Nice one! I really love it. Thank you for sharing this.

I love this story!

They are just too cute! I haven't seen a story about the 3 of them yet!

Besides this one, you know what I mean.

love it~! XD

Oh god, the way you've captured them here is really, really wonderful! And totally adorable.

The Asakura's really are a cute as hell family.

I enjoyed this alot, thanks for sharing it with us! :)

kudos to you xD

I do think in the manga, there's lack of uhm YohAnna with Hana

more Tamao-ish (and she's becoming like Anna lol)

this is really good

I've only recently got into the series (I know the plot from wikipedia), and yet I know that both parents did truly love their son, they just had him in mind when they left him.

good story.

i liked it a lot.

Epitome of cute-ness. For sure. This was so cute and touching and everything all at once. You captured their dynamic perfectly if they had ever met each other and interacted(which the manga delightfully EXCLUDES from the story arc). I absolutely love this! :) very well written

-SL

Loved it! WRITE MORE!

Aww, that was the cutest thing I've ever read!

Loved it, especially the way Anna acted towards Hana. And, of course, the part with "Gimme kiss, Anna?" was absolutely adorable!

If Yohna makes the world go round, Hana makes the world inflate to cuteness. :D And I laughed at this little thing: Yoh grinding his teeth while he sleeps?:)) Yay for Yoh Anna Hana!:D Yay for you!:D

Very cute. Hana-chan sure is adorable in the fanfic, and Anna is such a caring mother. XD She cant let the others know that, it will ruin her reputation. Just kidding! Great fanfic!