I enjoyed it, but there are many mistakes. First off Captain Cutter has black hair, and Mary has red. Lord Hood, and Captain Cutter were good friends. The Spirit was on Harvest for Six years, and the story takes place after five. So, in your story Serina is eleven years old.

Few stories entice me as much as this one has, thank you.

Now I just need to know where Red Team, Anders and the ODST clowns that are Parker and Toril end up, and how Serina is getting along in her new shell...

To the Spirit of Fire, and her crew.

I was looking forward to the reunion between Cutter and Hood. According to the lore, Hood was Cutter's former XO

WTF is the beginning of this chapter

I love the detail that goes into the description of the battle between these two ships. And more follows after chapter 9!

Cutter got his family back... *breaks down in tears* Awesome story bro! *carries on crying*

Amazing story. And to anyone who likes halo wars the halo wars 2 trailer is out and the game will be available in fall 2016.

I thoroughly am enjoying your story and how you portray the Spirit of Fire's lonely voyage back home (it feels quite Battlestar Galactica-ish to me, and it's excellent!), however, I can't help but notice some lore mistakes you've made, like MJOLNIR being affected by an EMP and Alice-130 and Douglas-042 actually being afraid of getting affected by Needlers. That is not the case in lore, MJOLNIR's hard layers are too strong for needles to actually penetrate them, let alone cause any damage. The needles would shatter upon impact. Also, the EMP part... no, MJOLNIR cannot be affected.

It's been said that, even if a destroyer-type warship would be affected, MJOLNIR would never lose its effectiveness. Even if it would, the armor itself would never be able to paralyze a SPARTAN. I mean, the armor amplifies a SPARTAN's powers when activated, but it cannot harm the movements when unpowered.

Also, there are some minor grammar mistakes at random areas, and you overall portray SPARTANs more as Marines or Army Infantry than actual super-soldiers with no humanity in them, but for me, personally, that doesn't take away the overall quality of the work you've made.

I applaud you, because not many fanfics (that have lore mistakes) can sate my hunger for reading.

great story will their be another story they will go after this as Serina lived and is now an Forerunner AI

Freaking awesome! I loved this story so much. So worth the sacrificed sleep. I've always wondered about the Spirit of Fire; it's been one of my biggest unsolved mystery int he universe. I'm so sad this is over. Really can't say enough, just freaking awesome.

extremely boring, you focused too much on humans and not enough on the forerunner

Man, that was good. Its so hard to find a well written story on this site, but you have managed to come up with something spectacular. Great Job, and keep up the good work!

very very nice

I get it.
The cruiserhas doors covering the weapons, to present a smooth surface for a cloaking system

great story. loved it