so nice to see the softer side of Ian.

This is so visceral. Really, it's like I can see and feel each detail in front of me, so naturally. It's very cinematic. In short, I loved it.

Omg this story almost made me die. You're a very powerful writer and I thank you a lot for this story... It really added to what I think would be the perfect Ian/Charlie relationship would be.

I like Ian and Charlie together. I think it's cute and I hope that u write more

Real good but doesn't feel complete.

Aw! How cute!

I like this story, it's beautifully written, and very sweet, but I just can't quite reconcile Ian's character with breaking down like that, even if Charlie did rather push him into it. Ian declared in the first episode with him that he loved his job, and somehow, I can't see him too awfully upset about an occasional miscarriage of justice.

yay

I like it

love it great story

Wow... that was really sad... especially at the end...

But I still can't get quite over it that after weeks or even months I want to read an English ff again and then I just stumble over your oneshot. But then, yeah, coincidence is mathematical reality...

I don't really like these slash fics when men are in love with each other who aren't in love in the series, that's right. However, I quite enjoyed your story, although I don't even really like Ian too much. But you made him act real human for once, not the cool blooded killer, but a real person who really cares for other human beings' lives and who still has a hard time doing his job as a professional killer (aka sniper). This aspect of a (guilty) conscience is something I missed in the series and sth you made appear.

And even if I don't like slash (normally), it didn't bother me in your story because you just know how to write one. Again you constructed a logical and interesting case that just went along with the rest.

Oh, and of course it was in an awesome way IC that Ian just appeared behind Charlie without having been noticed :)

Really good job.

lauTOre (aka anne-aunyme)