Reviews for Kami's my what |
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Luciendar chapter 17 . 5/26 My ending thoughts. It's a good story. I real enjoyed it for the most part. The character who bothered me the most was Naruto. His knowledge and wisdom were simply unbelievable at times. It just made his character seem fake. Him constantly outsmarting people like the Sandaime and kakashi was just too much to swallow. The kage bunshin joke about doing paper work is played out. Naruto is also jutsu to black and white at times, as I mentioned previously. The world isn't simple, and if he's supposed to be as wise as you made him then he should understand that. Now, is it me or did you just forget Tenten all together? Wasn't Naruto supposed to take her on a date? You mention Anko quite a bit but haven't actually given her much development. Honestly though, the easy this story started off was crazy. It seemed normal at first, then I thought it was going to be a lemon story, and finally ending up as a cluster f. |
Luciendar chapter 16 . 5/26 That wasn't very fair of Naruto. The future is never certain and only a fool gives a definite answer when it would depend on the situation. Ino and Shizune deserved a hell of a lot more than that, especially ino who has chosen him first over everything. The girl put her career in jeopardy because of him. She has began taking in his pain. She's risked so much. The world isn't black and white. |
Luciendar chapter 3 . 5/25 This story is strange. It totally wasn't what I expected. |
Guest chapter 1 . 4/10 Ugg7gigugihoh |
Guest chapter 3 . 3/22 Started out nice. But the Ino stuff ruined it. |
haylesanthony5 chapter 17 . 1/29 when are we geting more |
Cocagne19 chapter 10 . 10/20/2019 Wasn't Naruto specifically told not to tell a mortal soul about the gods? |
Andrew Frederick chapter 17 . 9/15/2019 Will there ever be a chapter 18 |
Guest chapter 17 . 9/8/2019 So about the time naruto puts his big boy pants on you quit the story? |
Kingkong101 chapter 14 . 7/5/2019 Carp |
Guest chapter 1 . 6/2/2019 Type your review a useless fic |
koseta.a chapter 1 . 5/8/2019 Do you know what a question mark is? |
Katsumie chapter 17 . 4/7/2019 Love the story very much , the only thing I don't like about it is the sasuhina pairing I'm a naruhina fan, but other than that I love this story and give it the panted Db thumbs up . And would love to see you finish it and see wear it goes from here. I hope you put up another chapter soon . |
Monster King chapter 17 . 4/7/2019 Great job please continue the story |
Monster King chapter 16 . 10/30/2018 Great story |