Reviews for Alpha Female
Portside Crowds chapter 1 . 7/25
The subtlety is perfect and beautifully written. Thank you for writing!
HinataOverAnyHoe chapter 1 . 6/27
One of the best Sasuhina pieces I've ever read! I always come back to this whenever I'm sad and need a pick-me, this is honestly a masterpiece. Thank you for writing and sharing! Xx
Guest chapter 1 . 6/4
Really well done!
Ayerim Herrera chapter 1 . 5/30
to perfect 3
Guest chapter 1 . 5/19
I kinda liked Karin in this. Karin isn’t even a bitchy character, but most fanfics make her the wickedest girl ever. In general Uzumaki are pretty clingy.
Lotusxdoll chapter 1 . 5/11
This is such a good one shot. I like how it revolves around Hinatas relationships with the others rather than focus on Sasuke. Great job!
anon chapter 1 . 3/24
still excellent!
Guest chapter 1 . 2/14
Absolutely loved and adored this
Reply series chapter 1 . 12/23/2019
(ω) ~~3 I like how it is the thought of Naruto that actually has Hinata start thinking deeper about Sasuke.
That was one of the most organic feeling weddings I’ve read. As an added bonus Sasuke seems to encourage the noise so as to upset the “neighbors.”
The entire time I was reading the post-marriage moments I kept thinking,”Ma—n, Hinata seems like a manga/anime yakuza boss’s lady.” Which made me think of ‘Stop! Hibari-kun, an—d now I’m remembering I reread a Wild Ones volume earlier today. { •};
RougishLady chapter 1 . 12/4/2019
Beautiful
asdanakaren chapter 1 . 7/24/2019
This is by far one of my favorites sasuhina oneshots! i always come back to read it cuz i just love it. thanks for sharing this with us! (:
Katie chapter 1 . 1/17/2019
This is by far one of my most adored stories! I know it was posted ages ago, buy thank you for sharing this. It always warms my heart to see the SasuHina written in such a true to character way, and their ragtag family is so funny! Gotta love Mama Bear Alpha Female Hinata too!
AnonGuest0 chapter 1 . 12/25/2018
"Yet there is something warming beyond belief to sit at summer festivals and have people who melt away from Sakura and Ino to come talk to her instead. " i like this line because its an idea that i do envision for hinata. Sakura and ino are always the loud center of atention girls but now hinata has her own warm group.

Anyway, i liked this alot how you acknowledge team hebi/taka as a mirror of team 7 and a sort of family sasuke has gathered. I like how they stay together. Jugo is like an uncle in the family and he has a place in the village by contributing herbs. Karin accepted hinata and how you said karin just wanted to be loved was very suiting. I do kind of disagree about suigetsu because he only acts tough and talks tough but respects sasuke a great deal. Like even if he calls hinata with chan, its just talk but when something happens he would protect her. The uchiha compound is no longer empty. Its so lively with hinata with its matriarch, etc. Thank you for writing this fanfic. Fits my head cannon well. It was very in character for me.
Fishies2 chapter 1 . 5/3/2018
Gorgeous
Ranna Korsakov chapter 1 . 12/3/2017
this is what I call a well built story
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