i love it! do more _

Pretty pretty zachabooth story! In character slashy goodness, what more can a fangirl ask for? If you haven't guessed, I like your story and wish you many a plot bunny.

awww that was cute! though i felt bad for Zack for most of the story!

Not to sure how I feel about the ending, but over all I liked it. _ Ja.

A little short and time passing was a bit confusing but I enjoyed it.

Awww...that was a really adorable story! I loved it! _ And now for a fair review!

The Good:

-You really know about the series and conveyed it with sly references. Most notable was that line about Zack's singing.

-It was good seeing a more concerned and affectionate side to Booth in contrast to his televised personality.

-Zack's friendship with Sweets felt very natural, not forced at all.

The Bad:

-You sort of forgot to explain the fate of Booth and Bones, i.e. the details of their brief romantic relationship and break-up.

Overall:

You have a very nice writing style and enjoyable gradual progression to your story. Keep writing, you've got talent!

I've read your stories (or at the least the Bones one), so I just wanted to tell you once more that you are very talented.

Keep it up, girl - and see you around, I guess 3

Awww... I still can't believe they put Zachoroni in the freaking loony bin!

can you write more? there aren't alot of good Zack/Booth stories like this one

Love it! I wonder if you've considered expanding it? I think you've got a really good set up if you wanted to continue it. And I really wish they would release Zack and bring him back. I think he is one of the most fascinating characters on television, and he is being wasted. Sigh. Anyway, love the story. Thank you for writing it!