Really love this story. Not too fond of AH stories as a rule, but this is awesome. I am definitely Team Edward/Vampire, but I totally love Jasper too. You have really captured their personalities. You wrote the Bella and Edward break up so well. And the sex scenes (wow!), jeez I'm lying here dreaming about gay men sex! Very glad Jasper went to Chicago with Edward, much more for them there. Thank you.

Great writing here honey! ;o)

Loved loved loved

Ugh. Peter is such a sleaze in this story so far... a cowardly one. Meh...

Good story lol.

Peter is just being irritating in my opinion. He may as well pee on Jasper's...leg lol.

Not gonna lie, I thought this was going to end up as a Japer/Peter fic.
I really wish you had written a spin-off with Peter and Demetri. Oh, the angst...
I'm slowly making my way through your NEVER ENDING list of fics.
What to read next... guess you'll find out soon enough ;)
xoxo
Mina

I loved this unusual story. I loved the way you described how it can be difficult when you don't fit in the mould, when you feel different and rejected. Very well written and more profound than I expected. Passion is often as painful as it can be extatic and overwhelming, but love based on common grounds / tastes and expectations although it may seem less glamorous, can bring potentially so much more happiness...
Thanks for sharing.

I liked it. But I would have loved to seewhat happened over the two years for jasper and edward

Wow! I really loved this story! Great love story!

I thought this was a one shot!

Excellent surprise!

I've taken a long break from reading fanfic but remembered that I loved all your stories and ignoring the word count decided to read this. Just over an hour later I'm here and I wanted to leave a review to tell you that I loved it. The relationship you portrayed between Jasper, Edward & Peter was very well written and thought out. Part of the reason I got burned out with fanfic was that the characters became empty place holders with either mediocre or dramatic lives but yours managed to find that balance of life-like whilst still being interesting.
Melendine

I like your twist on things very much. You didn't go for the expected, but you didn't leave the reader dangling either. It also was a good part of the reading to not have every 'i' dotted nor every 't' crossed. A fine and enjoyable piece of writing.

You write beautifully!

great as usual

This was a very interesting use of SMs babies...I loved it! Great read!