THIS IS BEAUTIFUL! PLEASE CONTINUE!

that was nice

I read all three chapters in one sitting and have fallen in love with this story. There were a few grammar errors, but nothing big.

Looking forward to future chapters. c:

Short though it says a lot. It's a nice chapter. Update soon please!

P.S. Seeing some smut would make me very happy!

Please write more! I'm looking foreward to it! :D

THANK YOOOOOUUUUU! I've been waiting for awhile for you to update and I was starting to think it was going to discontinue-but you didn't let us down so your really awesome, what's Snow gonna do about what I'm guessing those three little words? He wouldn't dare reject him, I KNOW he has the hots for him, he just won't admit it. Anyway, thank you SO much for updating and I hope to read more of this lovely story soon.

ow my god i love this story great job

Aww this is really cute lol.X3

I hope you continue to write more..]

Awsome, just like the first chapter, maybe more so! Please update quizckly, I beg of you!

thats cute 3, update soon!

Hellooo my homo :D

your story is -beeeep-

only jokingg :D its tres gut!... hehe i just spoke 2 different languages ;D

byebyeee

:D I like it! Please update!

I love the background, it is not a failure, I reassure you. Now, just do not let our Bishonen well.

PS: I am French, my English is appalling.

Snow is protective hero as always. _

(So, in this story Hope still did not try to kill Snow, right?)

LOL In the game, when Snow and Hope fell from the almost Five hundred meters roof (in my thought, I did not actually know the accurate high of that building). I always wonder how came they survived without any fatal death wound. The only reasonable explanation that I came up is “the Game Director” -_-’. (At least, you made one of them in quite serious injure stage.) )

The way Snow cleaned Hope made me thought about daddy bathing his kid _’.

(Carrying the child, testing water temperature, helping the child take cloth off, etc.)

Well, those displayed Snow’s gentle side, anyway.

Aww, Snow's such a big sweet-heart!~ x3 This is pretty good for your first fic! Update soon! I really wanna know what happens to poor little Hope! 3