If someone wants to report you for this they should burst into flames. YOU GAVE A WARNING DAMNIT. They can leave.

This was amazing. I loved it sooo much.

I completely Loved this story!

It was very well written, though i noticed a few errors.

I look foreword to reading more from you.

Thanks again for the lovely story.

~Issac

That was... Interesting XF I can so imagine them actually doing that! LOL

(Hi cupcake! 3 T'is Aki~)

WE NEED TO RP MORE LIKE THIS! Re-reading it makes me drool. DROOL I SAY!

GOD. That was sexy. The horror of the girl dying, that changed to almost a mad sort of gore-filled, dangerous sex...the thrill of the hunt...

Gawd. That...that was sexy. XD; -hates to repeat myself, but dear god, it WAS- I wish this thing had more reviews. I mean really. YOU PEOPLE ON FANFICTION, GET OFF OF YOUR FAT ASSES AND REVIEW THIS THING. D

Who in their right mind would report you? You've got rights as an artist! And you are one of the few people on this site that can satisfy my sadisticness! You and your writing partner are brilliant and I love you both. You have gained a new biggest fan, my friend XD.

Nice twist with letting Marik be the seme. I myself don't have that kind of generosity. *claps for Bakura's generousness* And good for Marik for sharing his lovely prey.

Cheers!

~Zeao

Hot. This was most definitely gore filled, psychologically dark, and overall sexy as hell. If hell is indeed sexy. ;D

I love the detail and the way you really get sucked into the story line. Marik has the perfect reactions~

While that was certainly gory, violent and a bit disturbing it was also entertaining. It was nice to see psychoshiping where Bakura and Marik aren't mere pranksters. Nice (if horrifying) details made this story absolutely enthralling.

Damn. Now that was quite a read. Not something I read much but I really did enjoy it. I think it was because you wrote everything with much details, yet not overly explicit. It's a perfext mix and I can really envision them both doing this and rather enjoying it.

Great story, loved reading it.

Well done, my friend! very fucking well done...

I love how killing random bitches is like a marital aid for them, it's so lovely. XD

I loved the imagery and the language, and the way you write the characters is brilliant.

Hmm. Macabre, demented, and murderous. A delightful combination when paired with the psychotic duo known as Marik and Bakura. Personally I like all aspects of psychoshipping (except the really sappy/ cliche ones), so I hope you write another. If someone does report you, I'll be extremely disappointed, because I liked it. Keep up the good work -.