Amazing! I would like to read more... Please?;)

Cant wait for more of this.

This is a good Fic I hope it hasn't been abandoned.

oh my gosh please please please update this story is just making me so damn happy and i just need it to continue!

So, first off, I couldn't stop reading your story. I burned through chapter after chapter, and enjoyed every second of it. Secondly, you haven't updated in nearly 18 months, so I'm afraid the end will never come to pass. It's too bad, because this is incredibly well-written and enjoyable. I hope you finish it.

Very well written, but damn it was a shock to see it unfinished :'(

Bah ha that first paragraph: ME2 haha

I just finished reading it! This story is amazing. It brings out the realism in the game - like how Shepard is mature about her developing feelings for Thane or the fact that it's really hard to hit stuff with an assault rifle. Also, there is a very good balance in the tragic and romantic elements in Thane's character and the others as well :D

Very good writing style, easily read. The story is well paced and delightfully different than the game ( like when you add context to the game dialogue you used and it made perfect sence ).

I am ashamed to say I didn't read all the authors notes but I have a feeling you have a scientific mind that comes from studying the dryest of subjects ( physics, biology, chemistry and etc.). Best part of the story is that it's an intelligent read and I hope to see a new chapter soon.

3 Darky

So far it makes sense alright :) So keep it up! Very good work

noooooooo more.

AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH HHH! *runs around the room, tearing her hair out until the next chapter comes out*
Soon!
lol
Seriously though, SOON PLEASE? :D

love

Whoo! Update soon! This story is pretty cool! :)

Loved this chapter! It's so my canon that Thane would be upset about taking the opportunity for more life away from someone he feels is more deserving. Great characterization!

Eat your noms Thane. Eat them. Now.

Chawkwas is like a mother over Thane. I like this.

No, she just wants to see him nekkid some more.

Your story reminds me of some James Bondesque adventure, with intrigue in ever chapter and cool gun fights and such. Thane is kind of like James Bond; a trained killer, suave, sophisticated (maybe stretching a bit here) and worldly (for ME, that is). Your Shepard is like a MUCH smarter version of a Bond girl, with crazy biotic powers. There are conspiracies and shadowy dealings, and its far better than anything that Mac Walters could ever conceive :).

Brilliant move on the lung transplant. I admire how you wove it into game canon so seamlessly. It's not at all hard to imagine that someone buried under rubble might have some chest punctures or otherwise threatening injuries. I look forward to the Shepard/Thane confrontation, where Shepard will probably stubborn than into agreement. The storyline with the surviving drell should be interesting as well; I appreciate a bit of AU in a good story.

Also, REVIEW GUYS, especially if you want this story to continue. I don't know why you wouldn't be wholly in favor of a good Thane story continuing, especially considering what we got in the canon storyline.