good fist chappter

Great story but I just wanna make it clear that in Kick Ass issue 3 #4 the doctor basically said that she was perfectly sane, which she is

Best fanfic ever. i cheered and laughed and cried. cant wait to start the sequel. love this fanfic u inspired me. My favorite fic, im sure ill love the second as much as the first. keep writing, your amazing

This chapter owned! LOVE THIS STORY SO MUCH 3

Really epic story, certainly da best fanfic im reading

This is very intriguing keep up the good work!

I love it! But in the beginning I would have never seen Mindy being a bully... It really caught me of guard !

Amazing story great job!

OMG!I absolutely loved this story, it is so amazing, so descriptive. You are a great author. Keep up the good work. D

I...there are no words: I tip my hat to you.
The only thing I found to detract from the overall story was the rough flow of language in a few areas (the verb tenses are a little iffy). I was going to read this a while ago, but didn't have time until now (plus, the fact that kickass 2 is coming out probably helped to remind me XD). Well, guess I'm off to read the commentary...

Couldn't have written it crazier myself XD

I like it :)
Large does not equal slow. If that girl outstripped him in speed, she must be blindingly fast. The average claymore was 4 & 1/2 feet long and weighed less than 6 pounds, so a man of his size and skill could easily swing it multiple times per second. Just saying.

A bit jerky in transitions, but otherwise really good.

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Loved the story
Please make a Second part! )

One thing you always need to remebered:

what's happend in the city stay in the city or the grave in that point of the fic '

now I get the picture why The Demoness was so sadist O.O deep just deep!

I was wonering when you be back :D

yay you back!