Reviews for Eternal Rivals
jj chapter 1 . 1/7/2015
i can sooo see goku saying that line
DarkVoid116 chapter 1 . 9/20/2012
Haha, didn't expect it to be about that lolol...good one shot..
Guest chapter 1 . 7/11/2012
This was short but lots of fun. I really enjoyed this. :)
Individual Lies chapter 1 . 8/4/2010
Great story. I'm still laughing along with Videl.
ash12 chapter 1 . 5/1/2010
i wish you'd written another chapter with videl. This was really funny.
OverzealousDeku chapter 1 . 4/26/2010
Have you seen the dragonball z 20th anniversary special?

The ending is something similar but its not really a competition
GohanSSJ2x chapter 1 . 4/26/2010
haha that was funny i would have loved to see that too
TheBathman chapter 1 . 4/26/2010
I can totally see this happening if they went to restaurant. And nice, cute ending.
Gold Testament chapter 1 . 4/26/2010
lmfao man that was beyond funny it wasnt even on par with hilarious
FanficMogul chapter 1 . 4/26/2010
I'm not sure the Videl part was necessary, but a drabble is a drabble, can't really bring up that point here. Very IC, which is something to appreciate as it's not easy in such dialogue-based plain humour fics. I liked it, though if you would have sacrificed the shortness a bit and made them stop at their wives' orders a bit more, I guess it would've been more natural, ie. the obey-disobey ratio tipped from character slightly. Nice work otherwise, go, go!
Baaah chapter 1 . 4/26/2010
That was fun. Also I would bet on Goku if it came to a food eating contest.