Reviews for Eternal Rivals |
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jj chapter 1 . 1/7/2015 i can sooo see goku saying that line |
DarkVoid116 chapter 1 . 9/20/2012 Haha, didn't expect it to be about that lolol...good one shot.. |
Guest chapter 1 . 7/11/2012 This was short but lots of fun. I really enjoyed this. :) |
Individual Lies chapter 1 . 8/4/2010 Great story. I'm still laughing along with Videl. |
ash12 chapter 1 . 5/1/2010 i wish you'd written another chapter with videl. This was really funny. |
OverzealousDeku chapter 1 . 4/26/2010 Have you seen the dragonball z 20th anniversary special? The ending is something similar but its not really a competition |
GohanSSJ2x chapter 1 . 4/26/2010 haha that was funny i would have loved to see that too |
TheBathman chapter 1 . 4/26/2010 I can totally see this happening if they went to restaurant. And nice, cute ending. |
Gold Testament chapter 1 . 4/26/2010 lmfao man that was beyond funny it wasnt even on par with hilarious |
FanficMogul chapter 1 . 4/26/2010 I'm not sure the Videl part was necessary, but a drabble is a drabble, can't really bring up that point here. Very IC, which is something to appreciate as it's not easy in such dialogue-based plain humour fics. I liked it, though if you would have sacrificed the shortness a bit and made them stop at their wives' orders a bit more, I guess it would've been more natural, ie. the obey-disobey ratio tipped from character slightly. Nice work otherwise, go, go! |
Baaah chapter 1 . 4/26/2010 That was fun. Also I would bet on Goku if it came to a food eating contest. |