Absolutely lovely, and I could totally imagine this dynamic with their characters. Well done.

that was a really sweet and romantic oneshot but where is tonks i'm just curious.
These 2 would make an rather intersting couple Luna is just awesome she is my second fav charakter
after hermione in HP it was really a good oneshot.

cute, i liked it

This was very well done. You're making me really like this pairing. I hadn't even thought of it before. I like the imagery you portray.

I've really come to love RemusLuna... you write them so breathtakingly beautifully.

'Luna had shown him a beautiful reality that had kept him afloat during the war, but now it was over Remus hoped that every day could become as happy as their nights together had been; if anything Luna's world was about pursuing joy, no matter how whimsical or farfetched.' I really, really

That's an interestng story. I'd never thought of the idea of Luna and Remus before but actually, i could definately see how it could work! Well written!

I'm am really starting to like this pairing. You do such a great job with Luna -most people either over do her "oddness" or under do it.

My favorite part has to be:

'And this, Remus knew, was farfetched, but he found that as knocked on the door to her home, he did not care.'

I'm not really sure why it is my favorite but it just stood out from the rest.

:D

-Morghen

this is the first Rena from Remus' point of view! what can I say, great use of the lyrics, beautiful writing as ever and it's just so sweet, so them.

I like how you portray Luna, with out all the overstated flights of fancy that most give her. She's a serene person who believes and you write her like that.

Good job on the chapter.

It would be better if it has more interaction. It seems more like a summary than a story.

There are some grammatical problems as well

"Remus remembered the way her in which knowing blue eyes had remained attentive during meetings," is a little bit confusing.

I suggest you to delete "in which" and "had"

"Now Remus realized that it was this moment in which Luna had gotten under his skin."

After "now", there should be a comma. Substitute "in which" with "that".

It would be more coherent, if "It had not been uncommon, particularly as the conflict had grown worse, for people to seek one another out for comfort, and some couples remained together." could be change to 2 sentences.

"Luna had shown him a beautiful reality that had kept him afloat during the war, but now it was over Remus hoped that every day could become as happy as their nights together had been; if anything Luna's world was about pursuing joy, no matter how whimsical or far-fetched. And this, Remus knew, was far-fetched, but he found that as knocked on the door to her home, he did not care."

Put a period or a full stop between over and Remus. "become" should be substitute by "be".

I just don't understand the last sentence. It would be better if it changed to "Remus knew her world was far-fetched. As he knocked on the door to her home, he realized that he did not care about it."

However, the fic is still good.

Wow, first time I've read "rena" as you seem to call it and it was deep. You should feel pleased, it was nicely written and it flowed wonderfully.

Good work!

Yours,

Lumos Maximum