honestly a bit disappointed on some of the pairings like guren, tayuya, kurenai, and samui, that being said any chance of yugito, konan, tsunami, haku (female), fu, and mei being in narutos harem

Man thus story got me hooked it's such a good read ESPECIALLY with the humor every chapter got me laughing and I like how you don't fully stick with just humor, there are serious parts in it as well

another plus would be the girls naruto gets, in other harem fics where they just meet the guy and boom the whole I love you comes right after never sat right with me but this one, even though it KINDA follows the same route but it's different at the same time

Right now I am just waiting for the next chapter to get here soon

Pfffft hahahahaha wow people are complaining about FanFICTION not being Cannon? What kind of moronic way of thinking is that? If they want the cannon then go read the freaking Manga or watch the anime. Anyway it's nice to see you back and with a new chapter, I look forward to seeing what Sasuke is up to.

Congrats, you turned Konohamaru into a pedophile. Hanabi is barely 10 years old at this point while Konohamaru is 12, meaning he screwed a girl who hasn't even graduated. Again, congrats.

Idiot fanon bastard.

And reason three: it is HIGHLY unlikely Naruto can throw a marked kunai THREE DAYS TRAVEL AWAY! Hiraishin requires a seal to be placed on the target location, or on an object that is at the target location, so unless Naruto went around dropping Hiraishin seals in Suna, Demon, Yuki/Haru and wherever else, he isn't teleporting anywhere.

Pull your head out of your ass and make an attempt at being on point. While here, I shall point out that Rinnegan only grants access to FIVE BASIC ELEMENTS: FIRE, WIND, WATER, EARTH, LIGHTNING. Not all elements, so no ice release, no storm release, no dust release, no blaze, none of that. It can only grant those elements when active, so that means basic Naruto is stuck with wind, not every element in the series.

Clearly, everyone in Konoha is crazy, since they are always blushing or laughing like crazy. Pick a new, line, that one got boring and overdone to death during chapter three.

The Namikaze weren't a clan, they were a no name family whose only significance was producing Minato. It is the UZUMAKI that are a clan, one that ruled a whole hidden village. The Uzumaki clan was a split off of the Senju, with even stronger life force and chakra than them, the same Senju clan that produced a man who could grow entire massive forests with nothing more than his chakra and created a Sage Mode without the aid of a summoning contract and no training. At all.

You idiots need to stop getting hung up on the Namikaze family. They were, as I said, nobodies. That's like saying, "OH MY GOD! It is Tamaki, the crazy old cat woman's granddaughter! Her family is amazing!" They aren't. In fact, her family is so insignificant that she only got a family name by marrying Kiba. Once more, get over the Namikaze family. Do some actual research instead of pulling whatever out of your ass.

This was amusing the read.

Most of all my favorite girls are in the harem, so that's a bonus for me, and the interactions are great. Hoping to see more in the future and just exactly how Sakura will redeem herself in the end.

You had done a good job in this story dude.

update and don't listen to the negative comments.

Skimmed this to see if I was right about this being trash. And I was right. This Naruto is so unrealistic why is he just go with Hinata this complet trash.

What the fuck is up with you and your shit side-pairings? Seriously, fuck off with that shit. You're over 30, so write like a person who is over 30 years old. You dipshit.

Love this! Keep going!

holy fuck you're 30 and you write this kind of shit, get a life dude

Koyuki