WOW, WOW, WOW. I love this story so much I just want to snuggle it and keep it with me for a while. Thanks for the story. Loved the interaction, the medal, the promotion, just... all of it.

I've just re-read this story and realised it was your first SGA fanfiction. I loved it you did a brilliant job.

So good, thank you!

That was a really nice warm family story. Not too many people write about John and Dave, but you could feel the caring.

heartwarmingly beautiful. family, reconnecting and relearning each other. love torrenjohn nd jolya.

Thankyou for sharing this story I really loved it. I always imagined John would be great with Torren John and your story conveyed that brilliantly. I'm looking forward to reading more of your stories in the near future.

I usually stick to the John Sheppard action or whump stories on here, but I am a sucker for Dave Sheppard stories as well. So even though this was a gen story, I saw that you borrowed Julia from T'Pring's stories (which I love), and I had to read it. It was fantastic. I love everything about it: John and Teyla's complicated relationship, Kannan being basically out of the picture in Torren's life, John being VERY in the picture of Torren's life, the funny banter between all the characters, and of course, David Sheppard. I wish SGA had had a writer like you working on the show. I think it may have been on tv longer. This would have been a perfect season 6 episode 1. I will definitely be reading more of your SGA stories soon. Thank you!

I have read this story a million and one times and I love it more and more every time.

Excellent !

Wow what an amazing story! I loved the view Dave had of John and the team.

Amazing story.

Hi, just recently discover your works and i am letting you know how much I love it!. After several years, I have just discover Stargate Atlantis. I'd watch the original but never looked at the SGA but your works with Teyla and Sheppard has me yearning for more. I do wish other writers had written more Sheppard fanfiction with Teyla. The characters are great together.

Wow, great story. I couldn't stop reading it. You have a real grasp of the characters and breathed life into Dave's character. Well done!

I love the characters interaction

Love the Torren fluff! It was just absolutely adorable!