| Reviews for May and Drew's Wonderful Chocolate Adventures |
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   reppad98 chapter 2 . 4/11/2017 Hahaha, oh my, this was a really amusing story. I'm not sure what I like more - Drew's teasing, May's reactions or the awkward situations they get into. I mean, imagine how it would have been if May's parents had caught them like that in the kitchen haha. And then the previous chapter was also very nice, it's just hilarious to read things from Drew's point of view. I don't know how May manages to put up with Drew all the time: sometimes nice and giving compliments, yet never knowing for sure if he's really genuine or that he's just teasing. But May is slowly learning how to come up with comebacks haha. I really liked Max's appearance as well, here. I do hope that - if you're ever going to update again - that Ash or Brock or maybe Misty will make an appearance, too. Or Solidad and Harley XD PokeshipperByHeart recommended this story to me, by the way :) Thank you very much for writing this, I hope you're going to continue it sometime, and keep writing! ! |
| Cheeno chapter 2 . 7/5/2015 Great story! I also want that kind of chocolate which makes things happen, but I would be content with flying pancakes too ;) |
| Tropicallight chapter 2 . 5/27/2015 That's awesome... |
| Hatchling Eevee chapter 2 . 8/19/2013 I wanna try it now |
| 896789645364w65678908 chapter 2 . 10/10/2011 My family throws my pancakes around as frisbees to make fun of the fact that I CAN NOT COOK. Good story. I saw it was updated in '10, wanna consider continuing? :D |
| laurenkams chapter 2 . 7/23/2011 UPDATE PLZZZZZZ LAST TIME U UPDATED WAS ON MY BIRTHDAY. LAST YEAR! PLEASE BE ALIVE |
| Lovestruck chapter 2 . 7/19/2011 Ahhahaha! What can I say other than adorable? :D |
| 3 chapter 2 . 6/9/2011 This chocolate adventures theme is adorable with an edge of tension in there! I love how May and Drew's relationship deepens around each chocolate episode. They still get into scuffles while Drew seems to be trying to court May. Their exchanges are genuine and in character. I hope to see more chapters in the future. Here are some ideas: s'mores, truffle/chocolate truffle, Valentine's chocolate, hot chocolate, chocolate kisses, fudge, chocolate moo-moo milk. Keep up the good work! |
| Daughter Of Poseiden chapter 2 . 1/27/2011 Ask naranne, she is absolutely amazing and loves pokemon |
| ValerieJackson chapter 2 . 1/2/2011 Oh my gosh, these are flippin' GENIUS. xDDD Please please please please tell me you're planning on continuing. This is just way too good to only have two chapters. 8DD Again, loved it, loved it, loved it. |
| LoveLoverGrl chapter 2 . 10/24/2010 yay yay yay pls continue i give this story a 10 on 10 in plot! and a 9/10 overall :D cant wait for the update. |
| Morapores chapter 2 . 10/12/2010 Hahaha! This story is awesome, randomest concept, but so awesome at the same time, keep writing! |
| Lil Enchantress chapter 2 . 9/8/2010 Gack... um, erm... speechless. I love their fighting, but you know just how far to push it with them and turn it sexy/cute at the last second. I seem to end up blushing at the end of all of your fanfictions so far! (Haha...) This was perfect for me right now, by the way, because I'm in a serious chocolate kick. :) Lil Enchantress |
| AlisonTexas chapter 2 . 7/22/2010 lol i havegot thrown a pancake before, after it happened i laghfed my $$ off for about 5 minutes! |
| Darksiderwithdust chapter 2 . 7/12/2010 As fun as flying pancakes sound, I have never had the pleasure of doing that. |
