Goblet of Fire was Horntail, btw. Probably useless by now, but a friendly reminder.

Its been almost 4 years pls continue this

There is a REASON most of the time the entire uchiha clan is portrayed as evil, it's because the ENTIRE CLAN IS EVIL! It's progenitor is a ghost that goes down through the line corrupting and turning evil EVERY SINGLE person that sprang from him! Every single WOE the world has in the naruto-verse can be laid at the feet of the uchiha clan! It's a CANCER to the world!

You know what's absolutely ASS BACKWARDS about this chapter? Orochimaru (who supposedly SUCKS at sealing) is teaching naruto seals and jiraiya who is SUPPOSEDLY a seal master is teaching him nin jutsu (which orochimaru IS good at and has an encyclopedia knowledge of) doesn't that seem a LITTLE BACK-TO-FRONT to you? Seems very BACKWARDS to me. It's like having a horse teach him to growl and a wolf teach him to gallop!

OC's need to do an "obi wan", submit their knowledge and then die... EXIT STAGE RIGHT.. Never. EVER keep them for more then ONE CHAPTER and NEVER make them a part of the story, they are teachers, then get them out.

SCREWED UP RE-WRITE TIME.

If you look at it that way, yeah it might be age 12 or 13 when naruto finds out about anything, of course the IDEA of telling him was submitted when he was BORN...

It takes a year of doing nothing, a year of eating doughnuts, a year of building, a year of people yelling at each other that it wasn't done on time, 2 years of lawyers getting paid by the hour to settle the argument and THEN things get built. (notice this actually happened in step 3)

Also you notice, konoha went from rick-shaws and horse and buggy to SKYSCRAPERS and cell phones in about 2-6 years... That's a BIT IMPOSSIBLE. (they can't even be BUILT that quick, even with chakra)/

I always thought it odd, after shuppuden the guys of the series look like cancer survivors, the girls look like guys, and somehow all the hot girls get FAT... except ino who turns into paris hilton. I dunno what went WRONG, but something obviously did (same thing when naruto was born... 12-13 years to FORGET a village, a savior, a clan, and all their friends seems a BIT OFF to me)

Your dividing up the uchiha clan? Oh no, that means your gonna save some of the TRASH CLAN! Do the WORLD A FAVOR, just throw them ALL in the MEAT GRINDER, the only "good" uchiha is A DEAD ONE!

Oh so NOW the old monkey wants to make sure there are "no misunderstandings"... To hell with when naruto was born and he was telling all the people something that was NONE OF THEIR BUSINESS to know, then it was just "scatter gun and pray for the best"... WHAT A HORSE-SHIT MORON.

How do "advisors" pass ANY laws? What kinda BULLSHIT idea is that?

"bill got shot down"? WHAT BILL? There is no ELECTING LAWS, it's NOT a democracy in any way! It's sarutobi being SPINELESS and just going along with the idiots that make the most noise in order to shut them up! Personally I find ordering their VOICE BOXES REMOVED also works though! On what charges? He's the HOKAGE, the DICTATOR, the charges are "it AMUSES me". That's all that's needed.

How does an UTTER MORON become a chunnin if they don't know how a seal works? It always shocked and amazed me how much GARBAGE the "rookies" gotta go through, when WEAKLINGS like mizuki, irukia and the TRASH we use as "disposable" can make it to the rank! It's really a SCREWED UP ranking system that has NO BASIS in reality, it doesn't measure: ability, power, prowess, accomplishments or anything else from what I can tell. If it DID, mizuki never would have rose above "academy student". Ebisu would still be "gennin" and the world would know, that other then a handful, the leaf is actually pretty WEAK. (mind and body)

What dog says makes no sense, in fact in MOST of these stories of naruto the whole supposition makes NO SENSE. Even if naruto finds out about his tenant, his heritage, the WHOLE BALL OF WAX, how does THAT change anything at all with the villagers? What? "I know why they are after me now, so that makes everything okay"? THAT'S MORONIC. No, the villagers should be PUNISHED harsher, and harsher, until they LEARN, it's not acceptable behavior. They are all COWARDS at heart, so I don't think it would take MANY deaths before the message came in, loud and clear. After all it's for their OWN GOOD... If they did manage to break naruto's spirit or kill him, the fox would be back in all it's glory, in the middle of the village with ABSOLUTELY NO WAY to seal it again, so they'd ALL BE DEAD! It's kinda like letting your kid burn him/her self on a light bulb, in order to learn not to stick their hand in a fire!

Actually a mary sue, or a gary stu, is ALMOST the only way you can save this cock-up of a story if you think about it.. It's TRYING (and failing) to tie "hidden prince", "unknown power", and "hidden beast" ideas, interesting thought, but NOT ALL IN THE SAME DAMN VILLAGE! TO CLOSE OF QUARTERS mate! It fails!Over a nation? Maybe, The world?.. Yeah it works... A CITY? (that never changes?) no, not at all.