please please please update SOON

Update this book more

Please update!

Are you going to continue this story or is it abandoned?

I LOVE your story please update

Is this story finished? I look for more coz I really like your storys keep up the good work!

You've got a good start to what could be a great story. I noticed that you haven't updated in two years and hope you will decide to begin writing on it again.

And I thought your Molly Weasley is better than the other Molly's in soul bond stories. They are MARRIED! Of course they can sleep in one bed

Please continue soon! I think it'll be interesting to see how this changes what will happen later in the series.

There's so many things I love in your story...Albus is not a manipulative old fool; they were told immediately what soul bonded means; the Weasley parents especially Molly accepted it without too much hassle; and Harry acknowledges his feelings towards Ginny

Love Harry's protectiveness over Ginny and it's so cool that they are both Parseltongue

So they can see the essence in people now. It's there anything they can't do? Try to make it somewhat realistic for their ages and character.

Also, if they can see he is a werewolf, they should be able to see Peter Pettigrew is Scabbers.

There is no characterization whatsoever.

Characters actions contradict their characteristics.

Yes, the family that neglected him, abused him totally deserves a house for free, given by the same boy they abused.

I really want to like your story, but you make it hard on me. The concept is great, but the execution is quite shoddy. It mostly reads like a first draft, what with the rough and clinched storytelling and the confused or missing words.

Also, you need a britpicker, because your way of writing is too American for this story.

Additionally, your short scenes don't benefit the characters, because before they can gain any depth, you already change the setting; which is another problem, by the way: you jump forward without any warning or literary mention - it just happens.

All in all, if you clean up your storytelling a little, I'll be overjoyed to read more from you.

Keep narrating,
Ranma-sensei

Yehey an update! Thank you so much and I hope it will never stop until the last chapter