That was interesting. Really fun to read. You got them in character and ah It was nice. I really live this pairing and this was very well written. Good job! I loved it.

Hmmm... Very smutty, and I actually liked how you portrayed Near as a female. The question is, will she get knocked up? ;p Love the story

I really don't like fem-near but this was tooooo cute and hot;)

cute :3

Nice ending...

love it!so.. completely..hot!

fuck

this is fucking amazing
your writing is amazing

any chance of expanding on this au?!

Wow! You did an amazing job writing the genderswap. Excellently written. Perfectly executed. So glad this story was recommended to me. Hope you'll write another!

This's a very hot story indeed. *_* I liked it! Can I translate it into Russian, please? (if there is something wrong in my actions,please,tell me,I'm only a beginner huh)

Woah, that was so amazing!(:

I love your choice of words. :D

And in all, that was really, really cute. [:

Yours,

iMightBeYourDad

That made me smile so badly! Very well written with an adorable ending! I loved how Near teased Mello so much! Great Job!

I loves it the little game their playing so cute how it matters not to either of them who wins lol and how you write their POV lovely

I am a nineteen year old girl, not unused to the occasional sexual encounter, and yet the whole time I was reading this I had a deep blush on my face and I was wrapped into a tight little ball on my living room floor, wishing I had a cigarette.

You succeeded in nailing Mellos and Nears personality perfectly.

PS I love the happy ending. Glad it wasn't a sex-only story.

I, er, I liked it. It wasn't my usual genre, but it was in character and well-written, not solely perverse. Good job...

o/o

This is one of the hottest genderswaps I have ever read! Very delicious. I love the teasing aspects.

I hope that you explore this pairing sometime again, I would love to read it.

wahahahaha. nice one

fem near X mello rocks

but this story makes them more hot lol