very well written story.

Expresses persona's pain at being rejected and his desire to be normal.

hope to see more stories about persona from u.

this was one of the best stories I've read so far. You seem to know a lot about Persona. It was so amazing and beautiful and the way, does Persona die at the end?

Wow! This is really great! I'm impressed. Poor Persona though...

I think what you wrote is very sweet and touching. There are not very many fanfictions about Persona and Nobara but yours was really nice cos it described Persona's feelings and inner thoughts verl well. I really love it! Write more! :D

~Victoria

Thank you for not making fun of Persona. This story was very touching. And you stayed canon to. Very realistic. I applaud you!

I liked how you told the readers about each of the major events in his life, and how he came to slowly realize new emotions. AwesomeJob [:

This is excellent fanfiction. It capitalizes on the original plot line of the manga, but holds enough of your ideas and creativity to make the story completely and wholly yours. I applaud the simple way it was written; that with a few words you're able to introduce a character so little known.

The other thing that I approve of is that even with the dark theme, there's a lightness to the tone of your story. It prompts sympathy, and that's what makes it a cut above other angst fics that have been published.

Good symbolism. Good flow. Great job.

Recently a lot of persona nobara fics have been written, but I found yours best coz it was the most realistic one. I really liked the way u depicted persona'a feelings

Gee whiz.

Haha, I was right in the process of writing a PersonaNobara drabble/oneshot for my story when I thought to check up on the archives just in case the idea was already taken and lo and behold, Persona Abridged. You've got my hook almost exactly, my ideas are very similar, though I never would have thought of encasing the flower with ice to stop Persona's Alice from destroying it, and to be honest, I'm at a loss. I don't think I could have written my story as good as you did.

Well done. I guess it's back to the drawing board. ;)

I absolutely love this story! My favorite part had to be the reversal in roles, with Nobara attempting to protect Persona. Very nice. Although the flower part was a touching scene. It was very clever of you to use Nobara's Alice as a way to keep the flower from dying under Persona's touch. This fic was a very good comprehensive study of Persona and the relationships surrounding him, especially with Nobara. To be honest, I rarely read GA stories, so I'm surprised that there are stories that make make fun of him, but I suppose it's understandable with any popular anime/manga. Regardless, thanks for writing this fic!