Kudos on branching away from the canon plot. The story's coming along nicely as well.

First of all, here's to someone finally writing a story with father/daughter fluff that i love. And here's additional kudos for writing a GOOD story about that stuff that has an arc, character development, and a lack of bizarre or underdeveloped plotlines or moments! I really adore this story and think it's just as impressively written as any other great fanfiction. Aliya is fleshed out and sympathetic enough that I can't help but be fond of her, which doesn't happen with a lot of OC fanfic characters. While I admire your decision to just keep the story open ended, I really would adore if you made some kind of non-canon sequel that follows the tale with some lighter fluff, perhaps seeing a more matured Aliya etc. You've done a great job of listening to your readers so I give you commendations for that.

As for your fanart, I'm something of an artist myself and I think I'd love to draw a half-demon half-angel creature like Aliya. I'll message you with it when I'm done, so I hope you like it! Keep on writing fun stories!

This was good and well written. Everyone was in character, and I'm glad that Agni had a part. The plot is awesome.

Finally they got past it, and saw eye-to-eye. And a cute moment to boot :)

I bet they will believe ciel now

and here will is being blinded by his hatred of demons rather than doing his jobs and finding out who is really behind the missing souls *rolls eyes*

well I bet Will will believe Sebastian now since no demon is stupid enough to reckless endanger their prey in such a manor and I bet this will allay soma and agni's worries ab Sebastian being a bad guy

and the plot thickens

a fitting end for lau considering how fluid his loyalties were

ariel obv doesn't what the queen or ciel involved in the affairs of London right now since both could derail her efforts and neither with turn a blind eye them since they are not in London's best interest

if only it were actually misspoken

she picked the wrong human to bait her trap with as ciel is almost as cunning and ruthless as most demons and that is got to be her undoing

yea ciel really isn't going to like hearing that the lives of him and his family were toyed with just to lure 'Sebastian' out of the depths of hell

ariel is not going to have her way

XD poor ciel