Funny that Harry would be blamed for something Riddle did. I am assuming Harry erased himself at the end

tHIS NEEDS A SEQUEL AGH

Wait so what happened next? *goes to check for sequels*
That was quite a ride. Confusing, but a ride.

*Rage*

Good ending. Still *RAGE*. Really good story and progression, I would have liked to actually see this continued, or maybe a sequel?

Interesting story, and the ambiguous end fits. I'm still assuming he got erased though.

You know, out of everything, I think this is my favorite of your stories.

I don't know what to think of this, on the one hand it's really good, but on the other, it feels incomplete

Very cool story but I'm confused about the ending. Which choice did Harry make? Take the chance? Or not?

errr, huh?

Ahhh, I did not want him to wipe himself from existence :(

It needs a wrap up.

Wait, what?
What happened?

Brilliantly done, I really like the fact that this ended without an actual end. Leaving it cut off like that is awesome and painful at the same time. Excellent work.

Cel

Wow, talk about abrupt ending. I imagine you did it on purpose to create an open ended ending.

Awesome start; and nice, clear, unobtrusive writing style.

›› A test of Fiendfyre revealed it to be impervious to even the most deadly of magical fires.

That seems like an unlikely and highly foolish thing, that Riddle would not do.

The most likely outcomes: (1) Oops, I destroyed the magical artifact that would let me win. (2) "Gee," Voldemort thought from his pit in Hell. "Who knew that destroying powerful objects resulted in HUGE backlashes and/or explosions?"

(This all seems amply born out by how randomly destructive the shard proved to be.)

›› Harry Potter made his way through the Forbidden Forest

Story needs scene breaks.

Great story, right up to the end. But the end was a total cop-out.