Great job please continue

YES!
I LOVE IT!

say that this is a crossover Fic and put it in the correct section.

This story was great until I saw the power level section why the f#$k would you put something from a different anime into this.

Hope you continue.

can you please start again please

This story is amazing
sad that you are not going to finish it though
Kind of wouldnt mind knowing what might happen next
Especially when Naruto gets back to his village

I really want to see what happens next!

Looking forward to next chapter!

Keep up the great work.

Awesome story, I like all of it so far.

Icha Icha at four years old, that's got to be most craziest thing possible.

I'll be honest. WTF did I just read?

The summary was giving me some sort of expectation of what it should be but completely throw out of the air with what you've written.

And the crossover was...uh, different. Too many cast and I'm not full aware of most of these crossovers myself. Too much fighting and not enough development. And you mention you've already written up to chapter 15 already yet you discontinued it anyway? Should've just post those 5 chapters anyway.

Oh well, at least it's discontinued. Hopefully you'll focus on your other story.

It was a nice story i hoped you would have continued it

Good work. It's very interesting.

Love the story please update and about chapter 10 I think you could have just made it into a lemon chapter and then have made the homunculi apper in the next chapter but still amazing work.

sooo... if you've already written ahead to chapter fifteen, why is it on hiatus? without those chapters posted that is...