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Guest chapter 3 . 12/31/2013 This was such a wonderful story! It was so sweet and well written. I usually don't read stories with OC's but I was drawn to this one and I loved it! |
ponypainter chapter 3 . 4/10/2013 Warning, warning, sweetness overload, will explode in to fits of aw in, 3,2,1...Awwwwwwwww. This is so cute, well done. Thanks |
Emerald Gaze chapter 3 . 6/9/2010 hmmm...i'm thinking ur future continuation of this will eith be ranmaru becoming a genin or skipping straight to hokage..which would skip past naruto's hokage time BUT! this story isn't about him oh one more thing,... this kinda unofficially makes ranmaru and naruto like brother now right? you know, i kinda wonder how iruka was able to basically raise ranmaru and naruto, man, being a teacher has sure given him some ninja worthy skills!_! |
volaju66 chapter 3 . 6/3/2010 Awww...I loved this. It came together beautifully and I didn't feel like anything was missing in the plot. Excellent work. |
Hatake Tsughi chapter 3 . 5/19/2010 Nice writing that was so sweet great job _ |
Lila Priceless chapter 3 . 5/13/2010 Aww. My dentist thanks you. This was so sweet I think I've developed a cavity. |
Luna Dark Light chapter 3 . 5/13/2010 I love this! It's so cute and sweet. I can't wait for the other story in this world. Ran was so cute. |
i am the night angel chapter 3 . 5/13/2010 Duuuude :D I loooove it! Ran is like, the cutest kid EVER! lol He's so sneaky D I love it But as usual, I want mooooooooore lols! This was an awesome fic Thank you :3 The chapter was sooo fluffy! Uncle 'Ruka is Daddy 'Ruka now xP lol YAAAY _ |