Awww that was adorable! The only thing that was a little confusing was the first scene, i assume they were in Gondoa but maybe you could imply that a little bit more? Like mention a farmhouse or something?
But great job overall!

Aww so cute XD I love it, but I wish the first one was longer :P Like explain what they were doing or add more detail?

This was a very pleasant, pretty and tranquil little tidbit.

It's gentle, cinematic, and I think, very true to the beautiful, classic film. One of my favourite passages happen to be Pazu's challenge against the sea; the scene was very endearing and so were the characters.

Thank you for writing this. Do keep at it!

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aww!

Aww, this is a really cute story. There really isn't enough Castle In The Sky fanfiction like this!