Uh... Seriously?! :o you're leaving it like that? XD lol it's like watching that part of the game again. Nice. Sad that you left it there but it was still good. Will you be continuing? I hope so n_n I really liked it.

Take care, and good luck. I'll be rooting for you ;)

Awww. That was sad :( but I liked it! :) You pinned the emotions down really well! I particularly liked the last line - 'golden despair.'

I like what I see here. The emotions you have in it worked well especially the part where she thought she could see the young Bayonetta. The only problem I can find here is the shortness and you spelt Balder wrong. No other problem though. :D

Boss

Beautiful.

At first I was going to go, "Bayonetta? BAYONETTA! You traitor." LOL Then I read this and thought, "Huh. Wow, this was good." Very well written and poignant. Great job. I never thought I'd read, much less enjoy a story about this game but you pulled it off brilliantly - even if it was only a short piece. Thanks!