Reviews for Shattered
was-sticks chapter 19 . 6/21
please come back
guest chapter 11 . 2/19/2019
I like how this fic, they ate pizza everyday, what's better than that ?
ssamii chapter 19 . 6/5/2018
i know its really late that i had read this great story, but still hoping for an epilouge. plssss. this is great! ️
SunBinamra chapter 19 . 3/27/2018
This fic actually introduced me to Trading Yesterday, and bless you for that. And while I'm a bit disappointed with the ending, I can't say I blame you. Fanfics are a serious commitment, especially the novel-worthy ones. You are a fantastic writer and thank you so much for sharing your stories with us! :)
wjgr chapter 19 . 3/6/2018
dude this is a masterpiece i really enjoyed it just needs probably one more chapter and then an epilogue or you could just put an epilogue onto it set in the future, either with the three living together ichigo goes back to uraharha place or you could set it years later with Ichigo and rukia being married maby a kid or two and then you could posserbly have Hisana and byakauya drop on bye with their own children and wala your done with the perect ending
Midnightfairy Stardust chapter 1 . 1/30/2018
Should end there
Midnightfairy Stardust chapter 1 . 1/30/2018
Love it you want more
CorruptedSoul72 chapter 19 . 1/17/2018
OML PLS CONTINUE THIS AMAZING STORY
Redflash04 chapter 19 . 12/29/2016
So you stop here and leave us hanging. That is mean you should make a sequel to this story please. I'm begging u *Gets on hands and knees to beg* seriously make a sequel I thought it was good.
anon chapter 19 . 5/9/2016
I know this is an old fic and likely never to update, but even if this is the last chapter, DEFINITELY NOT CRAP. Not even close. This is like the hidden AU IxR gem that's the only one of it's kind. This is so emotional on a whole different level, so please don't think badly of it. I read all 19 chapters in one sitting and while it is an abrupt ending, it's still a beautiful story.
U chapter 19 . 11/2/2015
O hope you get back your inspiration and continue. I absolutely love this fic. :)
StoryReigns96 chapter 4 . 8/3/2015
Your story revolves around Ichigo being a troubled kid, yet you have Rukia lecture him as if she is an authority on the way of the world.
You've reduced all his motivations and beliefs to "You can only depend on yourself."
When Rukia told a teenager that has been in and out of foster homes eight times and has lived on the streets for extended periods of time that the world isn't black and white, or when she berates him for telling her she wouldn't understand his life.
Again this story relies solely on human interactions and conflict and it utterly misses the mark.
Basically every time Ichigo is criticized or questioned, he concedes or changes the subject when there are such easy or even obvious retorts.
This story Feels eerily similar to playing chess by yourself, it makes Ichigo look like a fool because of how excruciatingly simple his problem 'appears' to be, and makes Rukia seem unbearably pretentious.
Ultramix chapter 19 . 6/11/2015
Please, Can you change the ending, it's driving me nuts ? LIke, really if this is your "featured" story, why not edited it and make it outstanding and really making it your "featured".
Ignis Draconem chapter 19 . 12/30/2014
Just when I thought I found the perfect story, I learn that the second half isn't there. I really do like this (and I'm saying this a person who has read hundreds of books and who knows how many other things) and really do want it to continue, so please write more. I found this show when i was 12 and I loved these two characters from the start. As a kid with a bit of a troubled past my self you have shed my favorite fiction couple in a new light that I can relate to, and I don't want this to end, so please bring it back!
PS- this was the first fanfic to make me cry, and I'm a nineteen year old man who is used to taking hits from my senseis without flinching (I take traditional Okinawan karate) so yeah, amazing job
Guest chapter 1 . 10/15/2014
I see u haven't updated in a while... Anyway I love ur stories please keep writing! Also please read bleach manga, something amazing happens!
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