Good job!

oh. my. god. that ending.

i loved this. you captured the panic of the loss of a secret perfectly

well done.

I think I've become addicted to your twisted writings. Seriously, this is the third one I've read. I like how Bakura calls Ryou his journal. Poor Ryou, what with Bakura crushing his feelings. Psychotic, demented authors.

This was freaking amazing.

Abuse at it's finest...ouch.

Dare I say..."Poor Ryou"?

I know that quote is used often and I honestly believe this is the kind of situation to say it...Bakura has lots of fun though and I love bakura ._.

I'm torn.

Awesome story.

I thought this was gonna be funny and the bit turned creepy... WOOT! It's 3am and my review probably suck. X_x

Deep! I like it!

Awww it made me tear up ._.

Oh Bakura, you're so abusive to poor little Ryou...just the way he likes it, though. XD

damn thats mean bakura. rofl

nice job

i know this was uploaded a while ago but i just wanted to say that i love that ending. it was very well thought out!

This rocked. D: Poor Ryou...

I love how you said Ryou was Kura's journal, that's ingenues!

Wow, I *loved* it! (: I like how Bakura was a TOTAL jackass, very adorable.

-Doublebee

...Is it strange to say that I was grinning the entire time I was reading this?

Well I was.

I felt bad for Ryou though.

I don't know, I guess the fact that Ryou was in posession of a journal and Bakura found it and started reading it amused me.

(I feel like a bad person towards Ryou for saying that, but it's the truth.)

I really liked the plot of this. I giggled when Bakura was reading Ryou's journal in the mock-voice-like something an annoying younger sibling would do if reading their older sibling's diary/journal. Kuku.

I absolutely loved it at the end when Bakura called Ryou his journal.

Wonderfully written, this will probably remain as one of my top favorites3

Bad Bakura! No biscut!

I never realized Bakura stole secrets (or books) as well as treasure