It's sad that this doesn't have more reviews, cuz it's very good. It has humor and sex and just a touch of angst. The part with Bella getting her period makes me laugh every time!

To my mind, this is a more realistic take on their sexual relationship. I always did wonder how they handled the period thing-I think I actually threw a mention of it in my fic last night in a chapter that hasn't been posted yet. I do like how Edward gives in, in your version!

Loved it :)

I love eclipse rewrites - nt because i dont like the original, but jst because eclipse is my fav book so i love reading more of it haha :)

Ah, lust- it's a slippery, slippery slope.

Very, very funny about the period. I actually laughed out loud. Poor Edward, thinking he had pulverized her insides, or something.

This was great. I like Edward deciding that it wasn't wrong for him and Bella to be together. And trust him to be so understanding at the end. You have to love that vampire sweetheart.

OMG! OMG! Oh Bella! Stupid periods! I'm on mine right now and it sucks! My bf and I can't do anything! SUCKS! Good job!

More would be great! Maybe from Edward's POV? I mean the bif dealb was rhat he might loose controlb and hurt her and he obviosuly didn't

Love, love, love this. LOL'd at Bella in the meadow - such a typical Bella thing to have happen. Liked Edward's method of making Bella feel better after her tears for Jacob stopped. :)

Oh, and yes it is possible, but rare, to get pregnant during your period. But it also is very possible for stress to cause early periods, as well as late periods, irregular periods, and missed periods.

Back to the story - well done. It's interesting seeing how things might have gone just a little differently. Good job.

actually...it is possible to get pregnant on your period and i think it only comes late... idk im not entirely sure it only comes late but 100% sure you can get it on your period

It is possible to get pregnant during a period, isn't it? And stress makes it late, not early. Trust me.

Apart from that, excellently tied in with the actual chapter. Well done!

ROFL, that is *so* Bella! I'd been hoping to see another revised chapter from you. Again, I really love the changes you've made, especially to the Bella/Edward scenes. Playing down the Jacob element without denying it - wonderful.