This is very sad... but i love it!
it's just the way the characters were portrayed, in my opinion, was spot on.
i would definitely read a longer/expanded version of this

I like it... made me cry but.. it was great!

Huh. I liked it...

. . .threatening...whattt!? That was the best thing I've read in forvever! Omg. The ability to pull that out of a dream and put the feelings into words and allow others to feel it. That's pure talent! Amazing work. Wow.. I'm still trying to think happy loving thought to get over this! Wow! Amazing.

Wow, really please write many more of this but longer! Gave me butterflies with the heartbreak and the swearing and the passion, you're a genius!

I would log in, but I'm in my iTouch and FanFiction is being a prick. That was pretty good, but I didn't like the ending so much. It was a little abrupt for me, and if I were Pepper I think I wouldn't have calmed down as fast as she did after I hit him. But that's just me. Overall, you've done a fabulous job with this. I was actually feeling close to homicidal (I think that FanFiction not working is making me violent...) towards Tony, which is not normal for me. Anyways, I hope to hear more stuff of this quality from you in the future.

Want to cry a little bit - but it's so good! AnnaTW

That's happened to me before- where I've had a dream about something and though it wasn't real the feeling stuck with me all day. It sucks!

Great story, though!

stupid, stupid tony! I definitely can't wait for more and I am hooked to say the least. I can totally feel for Pepper and I really want to smack Tony too but they have to get back together! I can tell he's going to have to work his a$$ off to get her back though, which he should after pulling something off like that.

Great chapter and update soon please! :)

O.O Wow. That was...intense, to say the least. I was slightly surprised that Pepper literally gave up everything and left because Tony slept with another woman, but heck, I don't blame her for being upset. I think my favorite part, by far, was when she was beating the snot out of him. Serves him right. ;) Once again you've written another lovely piece of literature, and I hope that you return to your dream. And if you do (or if you already have) please let us know how it turned out! xD

Actually is good I do hope you make more chapter or continue this story later on.

Brad Pitt, but he's a deuce and looking down the barrel of divorce. Kbut she's Karma's a bitch but she's better off with Chris Martin

Anyway, as well written as this is, its really depressing. And evil. I dont know if I like it or not. Soz

Wow! I can't believe you had a dream like this! It must be scary but i've had werid dreams before too. Maybe not like that but anyway I did love this story! i thought it was very good:)

Awwwwww...that was just- awwwwwww! :'( Such angst, but oh, it was mind-bogglingly sweet for me, too! I really, really enjoyed reading this! I also liked the angst, kind of a nice change, y'know? (: So sad and so wonderful, too! And I do hope your dream takes a turn for the better, and that the guilt of it goes away. I loved this! Write again!

-Person

I loved it and actually really liked the ending, that was a good last line by Tony!