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rocklesson86 chapter 9 . 5/7 Nessie and Bella are bitches. I cannot believe them. I can't wait for more. |
uffauffauffa chapter 9 . 6/2/2018 Bella does not deviate much from the character of the saga. It's hard to explain, there's something that does not convince me in the character. please, please, please ... continue |
uffauffauffa chapter 8 . 6/2/2018 The LEAH and JAcob plan is it may fail due to the presence of Nessie. She can somehow order Jake kill LEAH to show her his love. Luckily, Jasper is not as stupid as Edward and he realizes there is something weird in Nathan's story and Renesmee's behavior |
uffauffauffa chapter 7 . 6/2/2018 Sorry, I did not put the words that you said to put in the reviews ... okay the same ? Nessie is really twisted and Nathan is weak. |
uffauffauffa chapter 6 . 6/2/2018 I hate imprinting. Although Nessie is a carrion, she will always be forgiven by Jake. It will always be loved by him ... and by everyone else. If I remember correctly Renesmee has a power of attraction (Breakin Dawn when presented to the Denali clan). Jacob must choose, but if he chooses the little Cullen, LEAH he will not be saved. And this is not right |
uffauffauffa chapter 5 . 6/2/2018 I am happy to see that Jacob finds the strength to save LEAH despite he has many people against |
uffauffauffa chapter 4 . 6/2/2018 It will not be easy. Renesmee will try in every way to stop them and she will have her family by her side. Nathan and Jacob must make the Cullens understand how Nessie is actually a snake. The little girl from Cullen has been spoiled: the most beautiful of the realm, the most intelligent in the world, the most in all ... but she is only a very lucky supernatural creature. The portrait of the characters in the saga you made does not differ much from the originals. |
uffauffauffa chapter 3 . 6/2/2018 I love your story and I hope Nessie is punished as she deserves. She is the worthy daughter of Bella and Edward. |
uffauffauffa chapter 2 . 6/2/2018 In my opinion you have made a great portrait of the characters. The Cullens have never convinced me. For me they are just fake good. In the saga only Rosalie is saved, but Renesmee has a monopoly on her. |
uffauffauffa chapter 1 . 6/2/2018 Do you know what's the worst? The worst thing is that only Jacob cries for LEAH. For Nessie, LEAH was just one more thing between her and Jacob ... for everyone LEAH is in more. And I'm happy that Jake drives Renesmee away. |
Ginger chapter 9 . 3/9/2011 Plzzz keep writing ...it great! |
Dreamer Forever Ni chapter 9 . 9/17/2010 Dusk, and please, continue the story when you have free time. I actually feel sorry for Nathan. D: I hope he'll find a nice gal in the end... Oh, and I despise Remememe/Nessie. She's a brat. |
Dark Latinas chapter 9 . 8/31/2010 wow. update soon. |
o0FLAM3S0o chapter 9 . 8/4/2010 Update soon |
o0FLAM3S0o chapter 8 . 8/4/2010 Love it |