Reviews for Dilemma |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Kyarghhh Ur cho lucky tsuna! Good luck with both of them xD |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm like.. AWW! so FREAKING SWEET! YAY! It's the first where it F2718.. And I'm like.. SO FLUFFY! I really wish that Alaude would be there too... I LOVE THIS! |
![]() ![]() XD kawaiiii! XD LOVE Fon27! |
![]() ![]() ![]() aww that was so did a amazing job, keep up the good work! lazyass out. |
![]() ![]() Can you make a threesome between them?! XD pwease?! I would love you forever! (Not that I already did) I BEG YOUUU! 3 3 3 |
![]() ![]() ![]() That. Was. Beautiful. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Eh, what happened after?! |
![]() ![]() ![]() kiuuuuuuuuu Tsuna tiene lo mejor de los dos mundos XD i like your fic :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ahh... If alaude was alive w |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ahhh! Awesomely cute! I want to see more of this threesome! :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice work there. Never would of thought of that tri-pairing. Keep up the good work! |
![]() ![]() ![]() No lemon? T.T Ooh do you think you could write a 182769? That would be hot... |
![]() ![]() ![]() we need more fon2718 |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice, I like the pairing. This one doesn't seem to be as good as your other ones though. Maybe because it's one of your older stories... Anyway, the mistakes: Fourth paragraph, third sentence: 'made' instead of 'make'. Seventh paragraph, second to last sentence: 'silence' instead of 'silent'. Ninth paragraph, last sentence: '...into the distance' instead of '...into distance'. Tenth paragraph, second sentence: '...him from trying...' instead of '...him trying...'. Twenty-fourth paragraph, second sentence: '...nestled in...' instead of '...nestled into...'. Twenty-fifth paragraph, fourth sentence: 'All the while...' instead of 'All a while...'. |
![]() ![]() ![]() My brain just exploded, but in a good way! Thank you for that! |